The grammer is god awful. It is very very bad, if I took out a red pen most of the book would be inked(mainly early chaps) However if you jenga piece it together the story can be good at times.
Nisiris
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LIKEYou know it's his second language right but it's good just dont be like me who drooped this fanfic 3 times just continue reading and if your frustrated dont read cuz it will affect the reading experience you have to read this while your relaxed sometimes when were mad we make stupid reasoning so read with a relaxed mind