Comments of chapter undefined of HP: Magic Punk

The humor or try at it wasn't needed and failed. Ruined the chapter completely

I'll pass on this. It's just... too messy. 5 years of training that came out as nothing, now vampire that goes after a dog but leaves the humans, just to create this scene, then a vampire can cast magic (which I dont know if is canon or not) but more, if he can cast magic, why is he in the woods going after a dog and attacking physically. It's just all over the place.

yeah i am done the mc is to stupid

it felt forced, i will try to read few more chapters, if its like this i will drop it.

I will pass this. You can't even write the killing curse name right.

messy

Lets recap: Gets reborn, Abusive Orphanage, Finds dog?, Vampire appears, Instant crucio, Kills his dog. Let us see how much worse this gets. Got the Smartphone anime level of randomness. Random dudes rob 2 girls with an antler.

You killed the dog!

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

Author ignore people who complain for everything in the initial chapters itself, All the best

Cri ge

Avada kedavra* Really its one google search away…

Thanks for the chapter 📖😁👍

Nice chapter

Not a huge fan of the way this is going so far. The MC having a dog was cool, but it lasted like one chapter and that’s it. My interest in Red only went as far as “he is a dog”. Not that there’s much you can do with a regular dog, but this is a world of magic. I have little doubt that with magic there could’ve been something more done with Red. Plus Red’s death meant a lot to Orion apparently but it doesn’t to me as the reader. I feel like the dog wasn’t a character, just a plot tool for the MC and that’s it. We haven’t even been told how Orion and Red met in the first place. I can get using flashbacks to explain it, but it seems a little lazy to skip his 5 year journey then just use flashbacks to explain something away when it becomes relevant. I’ve done something similar when I’ve written my own ff.

Well I will just say that your concept, understanding, knowledge and opinion about the magic of Harry Potter are completely incorrect and incongruous... you use other universes that literally in energy(magic) have nothing to do with Harry Potter as a guide it only makes it bad for the majority who read these fanfics since they come from the concept adapted from Harry Potter ...not for a world in which all logic of the world in question is changed

cookies

ok I'll give it 5 more chapters nothing seems intreresting