What do you mean that Rhaenys survived the rebellion? Did you already establish that in your novel cant remember it xD

Kinda pointless having that god scene in the novel if he forgets about it,.. unless it becomes releveant later on..

Wow you made Oromis stupid, dont know how I feel about that

Why wouldnt he eat horse meat? One of the best meat you will get… Dmn vegans

Dude has a system that keeps track of all his skills… why wouldnt he start learning everything? And master them later? Honestly seals should be the first thing to look up and to start grinding it. But realistic would be doing a little bit of everything everyday Not full 8hrs of doing the same thing

Actually before you get to yasuac you would need to go through or around the village therinsford wich is where eragon and brom got their horses from.. did they walk all they way to yasuak?

Roger was 3 years older than main cast in the books or 2. Also seems kinda weird that the captain of the team is a second year.

Avada kedavra* Really its one google search away…

Those chapters coming soon?

Thanks for chapter, hope everything goes well for you!

So what are you gonna do when you reach the end of the original story? Keep writing further og u done milking ppl for work you didnt make?

Thanks for chapter!

Thanks for chapter! Just take a break or something :) Dont force yourself =)

To many rewrites from authors, just write how you want the story to be! Nevermind the readers

Well atleast you say in synopsis that this is not your story and you say on what site that story is, other than some other guys here in webnovel. There is this hagrid hp ff that the author is even charging people on pa t. R eon for when it isnt his story… Only thing you should do is change the name of the story to the original name or atleast put it in summary and the authors name… Name of story is Voleur D'âme by Twubs on ff . N et

You seriously have p a tr eo n for work that you didnt even do yourself…. This story is on ff already 30 chapters in, stop being a total twat and steal other people’s work. To conclude you suck, the story is however good and I recommend people to go over to ff net and read it there or on the authors web site, I think its in his bio on ff net Author name is cloud9stories

Sounds fun gimme more chapers! More chapters! Need to write more chapters Gimme gimme gimme more moar more chaaaaapteeeers! Write more post more more more more more more more

Pretty sure roger asked garp to take care of his wife and unborn child, when garp finally found her she had been pregnant way longer than normal to hide her pregnancy and thus died when she gave birth so then why would garp take ace if rouge is still alive?…

So author dont know if you will read this, but I think it would be nice if you could throw a info chapter up top with the stats chapter and all those chapters with just characters info, like a list of all character and maybe a few words about them(who they are) like im totally lost on some of those characters in the story and im guessing with the merc company and all that, that they are gonna grow more numerous and so it would be nice to be able to jump to one chapter to refredh who is eho :)

Allright honestly it feels like some chapters are super short and others not or maybe I am crazy! But it matters not, DONT stop writing! This is far too interesting! 👍😁