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Comments of chapter undefined of DXD: Revenge of the forgotten

Gorama_27
Gorama_27Lv2Gorama_27

The chapter is a failure, I didn't really have fun reading it and it's hard to understand the mc's point of view. I hope the new race is better written.

Maximus_Duke
Maximus_DukeLv3Maximus_Duke

I felt like this was rushed as a lot of it wasn't described well, and the whole retraining thing is just pointless filler rather than actually plot. Hope you fill out this new race more as so far nothing about it feels different or special. Anyway thanks for the chapter.

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Transhumanist
TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist

Now I see why you felt the need to put a warning at the start of the chapter. This chapter was pretty much a failure. Pointlessly naive MC and his uninspired and unexplainable goals were kind meh to me. Plot looks original and new but the lack of explanation on why Mc is trying to do all these were felt keenly and just coming after the endless filler of training etc. made the whole chapter feel unfinished and lackluster.

weeb_versus
weeb_versusLv11weeb_versus

can we have some sort of small timeskip where he does a bunch of stuff like finishing his body training and finding the dimensions or something like that

DarkNacho
DarkNachoLv12DarkNacho

Well diferent race now, Lets hope he now does not care about devils and if he care only take low levels or marginated devils that are there because the pillars let them there. Also with new race he is no longer a Gremory so not even by blood he has an obligation and with this not even canon is needed so no Rias help.Did he learn Human magic? Because in my mind Human Magic Devil Magic combine is OP. Human Magic should efficient but hard to do so if combined with devil magic to fill a few stuff that are to hard or just to power it. It mus be really OP.

TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

Nice chapter! I'm curious about the new race though, i hope you will explain in more details what new abilities and advantages the Mc and his race will get. If this race is supposed to keep beings like the ExE gods from conquering our world, then this new race should have a power ceiling to be AT LEAST at the level of Great Red. Should be even stronger on the MC's case as he is the "creator" of this new race...

Hot_mature_5km
Hot_mature_5kmLv3Hot_mature_5km

Very disappointing the chapter the change of race and the triexa thing is very meh😐

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

This MC is an idiot. It’s getting annoying to have him in a coma for half the novel.

indroid
indroidLv4indroid

The author has included a warning sign not to judge this chapter too quickly; instead, he/she encourages the readers to stay tuned for upcoming chapters. By the way, I also appreciate the new race idea.

Storm2023
Storm2023Lv4Storm2023

Sadistic mf😂😂☠️

_GoldenKing_
_GoldenKing_Lv4_GoldenKing_

It's getting better, I'm enjoying very much this book! good job!

Hephaestu
HephaestuLv2Hephaestu

Mega fajnie się czyta szkoda głownego bohatera czekam aż jego rodzice zobaczą na jakiego koza wyrusł i jestem ciekawy relakcji samego bohatera

Outer_God_Azathoth
Outer_God_AzathothLv1Outer_God_Azathoth

Thanks for the Chapter and it looks like not all people looked at your notice at the begining of the chapter.

Danny_R_0453
Danny_R_0453Lv1Danny_R_0453

I like this story keep up the good work!😁

SCayne
SCayneLv12SCayne

nice chapter and ignores those dissapointments author!!😂😂

PeachMonarch
PeachMonarchLv14PeachMonarch

timeskip

fianlking
fianlkingLv5fianlking

thanks for the chapter

Mathias_Irusta
Mathias_IrustaLv3Mathias_Irusta

Esperando el próximo capítulo 👍

Solgalao
SolgalaoLv14Solgalao

Thanks for the chapter!

dgun
dgunLv13dgun

thx for the chapter