What’s with the symbols all the time?

Yea this makes no sense, he has no guardian anymore because he’s emancipated and is an adult now so you making it so he can’t get his lordship and wealth is kinda forced and very very illogical. He has the full rights of an adult and you can’t just say he doesn’t when he does dude, you can say the goblin simply refuses but then he can get it out that dumbles is trying line theft. But this is bs and stupidly makes zero sense.

It’s already done dude, there’s no mending things when they don’t consist of what the universe already had happen.

This is supposed to be teen wolf, now it’s supernatural with stiles having dean’s memories and Lilith having a bone to pick with god? This just feels like a mess in the making and so random..

He better make them suffer the consequences or this is some bs

Okay I’m honestly at a loss so far, this is interesting and has potential but there’s some stuff that’s confusing. First off the first chapter stiles said he awoke future knowledge of what’s coming and then he started working out and ever since the hes acted oblivious to the supernatural stuff like it never happened. Then there’s the fact he wasn’t bitten by an alpha or anything and just randomly woke up with abs and there was no explanation to that. Then finally there’s the issue where you have stiles and Allison getting together way to fast that it seems forced, they met before school began and then by the time school was over that same day they started dating and throwing themselves at each other, it just seems forced and a waste to do that and ruin it. All In all this is interesting but it’s got some stuff that need fixing and explaining.

Also not true, it’s been speculated the creator of dragon ball just forgot to give them tails and so he just kept with it at that point. 🤷‍♂️

Would’ve preferred dark read ninja clothes with orange trim or something along those lines to honor his family’s red hair

He better cripple that guy

Quick question. Wouldn’t him successfully implanting hashirama cells into himself fix his eye problem completely due to how op the cells healing properties are? (Not to mention the wood release added on top and he can fight the tailed beasts and he will gain tons of chakra that make it so he could spam the family sword style and jutsus without problem)

I like this version of sev, it’s like he’s being back to when he was with Lily

Ayeeeeeee we finally get a nameeee

What’s her name and what info do we get on her? You just keep saying “her” and stuff about her being Cedric’s sister and that’s it

That’s not it lol, she is annoying because like every chapter she’s in up till now she is whining and being obnoxious every chance she gots and it makes people dislike the character when she just can’t act normal for more than 2 seconds. If this was once in awhile then no problem but it’s every time she’s involved.

Okay imma have to be real with you, 90% of this so far is a mess. There are wrong wordings, things are mixed up so it feels like I’m reading a Chinese novel, the interaction between the villagers is off because it’s too plain and mild when they are in actuality mean and malicious. The reincarnation part of this story so far is so irrelevant to the story that it makes no sense to have because he barely is in it so far. I’m gonna sound mean saying this but this story so far just feels like a poorly written and not grammerly/word checked at all, copy of the real story. Like there’s not really anything that differentiates almost everything so far besides a random dude in narutos head thinking once in a blue moon. So as it stands all I got to say now is this need re-written and thought out extensively, along with tons of checking the wording and grammer so it’s fully readable. This could be interesting if done right, so I hope you do re write, but as of right now I just can’t see this going well.

This hurts my head to read and it’s the first part of the chapter as well😅😅😅😅

He could teleport to the dark forest cause it’s technically not withing the wards, but he may get jumped doin that🫤☠️

Could she have looked into he kids future and the circumvented that?🤔

He has a literal angel in his head that’s been around for thousands of years that can train him and teach him in pretty much anything at an absurdly fast rate and if the mc even learns to transform for a few seconds at a time he will still be op due to the penence stare and all he needs is one look. Then you gave him demon swords that also have op abilities. No matter how you try to justify it, it just won’t make sense or make it better. Dudes op af and there’s zero way around it unless you straight up just seal everything he has and make his ghost rider powers start at .00000001% of max then it may work out, but you basically made the guy into a god before he was even able to enter the world, not to mention he can hop worlds whenever. I just don’t see this story lasting more than a few chapters as is man, you screwed the pooch before it even began😅

When did this happen, i re read the chapters and he didn’t get a want nor did it mention he was getting beside him needing to for school. I’m so lost here