Captain John hid his treasure underwater, which is one of the reasons for Buggy's hatred towards Shank when he ate his devil fruit. He couldn't get the treasure because he couldn't swim. It is illogical that Captain John is a devil fruit user. This is a part that is wrong if you want to stay true to canon.

So what would you do in his place?

Author is it possible to answer if the story is abandoned or still in Hiatsu.

I read until chapter 21 and I gave up because it's not interesting that the mc is too op too quickly. I liked the concept but I think it would have taken more time for the mc to reach the level of seal master. As advice, to follow a more realistic growth curve, aiming for a level similar to Itachi Uchiha will be good. Both are geniuses and have kekkai gekkai that works with Yin Realease.

Ce n'est pas l'auteur original. C'est une copie de la fanfic Sunrise (Quentyn Martell Si) de W1ngs sur fanfiction.net. C'est plutôt honteux qu'il y a rien dans le synopsis indiquant que c'est une fanfiction écrit par une autre personne. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

When Valeria become Queen?

I vote Thalia

The quality of the translation is good, but the story is garbage. He is an overpower mc who gains his power without any work. Additionally, the Ushiogakure and Mist War is poorly done with little strategic action and the global context of the story is poorly represented. Furthermore, I'm not a fan of the fights, I find them too poorly done. There is too much arrogance everywhere as if everyone is a Chinese sect master.

The chapter is a failure, I didn't really have fun reading it and it's hard to understand the mc's point of view. I hope the new race is better written.

I really like the story. On the other hand, I'm curious to know if you're going to make any big changes to the story now that Leylin will soon become a magus.

Vers good chapter

I noticed an inconsistency. Naruto in Shippuden he is between 15 and 17 years old. The mc is 1 year older than Naruto, so he should be 16.

I think the first arc you should do is a conflict arc with team rocket. Because I think that it would be necessary to protect its territory before the great war so that the mc can fight without the team rocket taking advantage of it to make a mess.

Do you intend to keep the same frequency of publication? Because you took almost 1 year to finish chapter 5.1 to 5.6, it's very long.

Is this fanfiction abandoned?

I'm a little disappointed that Cao Cao came and managed to hurt Serafall. I find the scenario superficial, because I have the impression that it is too forced so that it makes another voyage in time.

I'm sick of following your One Piece fanfics only to have you delete them every time. I stop following his One Piece fanfic even though I really like your writing style and your fanfiction. Thank you for the good time I spent following your stories.

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