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Transhumanist1dReplied to Nekomancer99I am sure you wanted to share some very valuable insights with me but I don't have the patience to translate what you wrote into something that makes sense.
And since you can't determine the truth, then prepare for the worst. Let's assume that Dumbledore is actually evil, the chess master and the dark lord maker." Lily said after contemplating for a few minutes.- Transhumanist3dCommented
She speaks like a teenager, or someone with the mental maturity of a teenager.
And since you can't determine the truth, then prepare for the worst. Let's assume that Dumbledore is actually evil, the chess master and the dark lord maker." Lily said after contemplating for a few minutes. - Transhumanist3dCommented
Yes because that's the worst thing that comes to mind when you see someone acting overly doting towards a kid.
I just feel that all of this can't be a coincidence. It's like we see someone doting a kid but that person's real aim may be to spoil the kid and make him useless. It's just that I can't be sure about it, I have no proof after all." Harry rubbed his brows in frustration. Lily too became silent. - Transhumanist3dCommented
Dude enslaved their minds, what does he have to do to be considered evil? Kill a unicorn probably? HPVerse magical have a hard on for unicorns and phoenixes acting as if they aren't animals with fancy abilities or appearances.
"Evil? I can't be too sure mom. Dumbledore keeps his occlumency shield employed all the time, I know this because whenever I use my ability on him, it always shows there. - Transhumanist4dCommented
Bruh
"Is this the plan you came up with? Glomo police station has a total of three thousand police officers!" - Transhumanist5dCommented
Why is Poseidon mentioned here as if he was romancing Sally? Wasn't she raped by the threesome of Hades Zeus and Poseidon?
As I grew up, my mother, Sally, became the center of my world. Poseidon had left us shortly after my birth, leaving my mother to raise me on her own. She worked tirelessly to provide for us, and I could see the weariness in her eyes. She had went from one job to another and I knew that I needed to do something that could help us live a more comfortable life. - Transhumanist5dCommented
Was he mesmerized by McGonagall's entrance? Why was she naked though? Or was he using some nifty trick to see underneath her clothes?
When he reached the hall from the teacher's entrance, he was mesmerized by the beauty of it. It was packed with students, many were still entering. Teachers had already taken their seats and were chatting with each other. - Transhumanist5dCommented
Meaning he will collect favors for this perhaps a tad forcefully if needed?
Akihara Kagura waved his hand dismissively at Kabuto Yakushi, nonchalantly saying, "Do you think you can help me with something? I'm just trying to thank you for the help you will give me in the future..." - Transhumanist6dReplied to FateDevilAceCh 293 Chapter 293
- Transhumanist8dCommented
Such a genius. Yeah maybe you don't need to tell them about the Outer God and reincarnation etc.
I brought my fingers to the bridge of my nose, looking down in a moment of weakness. I guess my friendship with these three is set in stone now. And it's not like I can't twist the truth a little to avoid explaining the whole outer god thing, or the fact that in another world, they are mere characters in a book or actors played in a movie. Nevermind that. That's something that can't be told no matter what. - Transhumanist8dReplied to Feather_Duster_
Yet the MC is just in the beginning of his Hogwarts career. There was no need to tag all these other franchises . Either way I've read the story. It's too childish for me, reading about a young teenager with a teenager's maturity isn't something I'm interested in. If I were you I would tone down the JJK fanboying, delete the incorrect tags, keep the AI usage to a minimum. The AI creates bloated overly wordy sentences that irritate the readers, especially considering your stories target audience is teenagers.
- Transhumanist8dReplied to DarkCreation101
He is acting like a 6 year old though.
I nodded, finally making my smile present. "That's so cool Mama!" I started playing with her hand with childlike wonder. Truly, I was genuinely impressed. My mother kneeled to my level height to look me in the eye "Yumi, this is what I hope for you in the future. The strength to not worry about the safety of the people you care about. I'm not going to be here forever baby-" I frowned, "One day I might not be there to protect you. It's up to you to be able to grow stronger from hardship, protecting the people you care about. I've failed once, and I can't fail with you." She caressed my hair, cupping my cheek, looking at me with an air of seriousness I'd never experienced in my previous life. - Transhumanist8dReplied to yenool_senut
The author probably thinks rare and obscure means easily acquired and mastered.
I smirked inwardly as if anyone had to tell me that. I always found it illogical to rely on a stick for magical efforts, especially when wandless magic was so rare and obscure. Although the most powerful spells allowing you to separate the soul from your target are hard to imagine casting wandless, Even more so when it applies to me... - Transhumanist8dCommented
You have to be pretty special to select 2 different powers from the same Fandom in a limitless wish.
I shivered. "matter of fact, give me Gojo's abilities too, I'd rather die again than think that bastard can beat me." The God laughed again, amused at my crassness. "Done, but be aware that you have to manually keep infinity on, and unlike the wish with Sukuna, you have to be more careful with the control of the limitless. Keeping neutral infinity on was pretty taxing on Gojo in his younger years, and even with reversed curse energy, you need extreme concentration to balance the overwhelmingly powerful dual energies inside you. Also, be wary of divine or cursed objects piercing your head or beheading you. In an instant, you'll die. Now, for your last wish?" - Transhumanist8dCommented
Ooh the MC is too enamored with his own intelligence, making assumptions left and right..
It felt as if the very essence of who I was, what made me myself was slipping away in the most painful melting pot ever conceived. "You have the temerity, yet I remain unoffended. You were unaware." As soon as I heard the now more serene voice, It sounded faintly sorrowful. As if it was reminiscing on a memory. No doubt from eons in the past. - Transhumanist10dPosted
Why would you tag your story with anime, Naruto, DC , Marvel etc without going to any of those settings? If it was just a HP story it would be barely readable considering it's your first story. Now we have a story that no one knows where HPverse ends and DC or Marvel begins. Will Thanos come for the Philosopher's stone? Will Martian Manhunter be the DADA teacher?
- Transhumanist10dReplied to KK9494
It would be positively wonderful if you could proofread your chapters before posting. Getting a beta reader would be a positive change in your story too. Currently your story looks like it was doodled on the empty spaces on a textbook by a sleepy Indian teenager while he was trying to ignore his teacher on the first class of Monday.
- Transhumanist10dCommented
It's pretty funny that a 17 year old thinks he is nearly an adult. When I see teenagers I can barely notice the difference between a 13 year old and 17 year old in maturity.
Yes, basically my previous name was Carlos, inhabitant of planet Earth, an Otaku addicted to anime and manga and a student with regular grades, I was about 17 years old about to become an adult, however, what should have been a memorable day for me, turned into a nightmare.