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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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ViolatedMonkey
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you should have had the MC change his name to Adam. he could pretend to be the original human.

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Zaid6556
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Instead of a power How about this Bene Gesserit Training From Dune Its a training about mastering the body and mind to the utmost limit and gain conscious control over them

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Eric_Allen_4764
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Good story so far

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Kinginthenorth21
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No problem excited to see you posting keep up the amazing work

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LeonidasCSNeto
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Thanks for the chapter

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Daoist737
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He has invested a lot, please don't make him lose everything, just because he can do more with his long life.

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DeejaeSutherland
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We should build a castle in England, or better yet Scotland with a garden of all the old flora that in a few hundred years won't exist, and become know as the Garden of Vǫrðr: Guardian, defender.

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Kranox
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Thanks for the chapter

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HecAllenWin
HecAllenWinLv3HecAllenWin

Excelente capitulo muchas gracias 👌👍

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theanimemail
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Side question: Does the MC have any kids? Or has he been a bit of a monk for the last 4000 or so years?

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SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10SpeedyG

Thanks for chapter. Awesome story... and hasn't even started the main plot!

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Reyviel_Faesly
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Thanks for the chapter! looking forward for more money making projects 😍

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weeboo30
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I'm loving this story. Does he have to become a vampire tho?

Daoist737
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Ha invertido mucho, por favor no le hagan perder todo, sólo porque puede hacer más con su larga vida.

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

Readtilltheybleed
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He is the origin of the secret society, controlling the world from the shadows…

Azathoth2
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Thank you for the chapter 🥰

Xedornox
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Omes_7736
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really love the foray into business you got mr mc doing. love a bit’o world building.

xevers
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Tq for the chapter