LeonidasCSNeto
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Enjoy the journey, don't long for the destination. This story is good because it is extremely detailed and slow, we all want to see Mikail in indigo, or fighting against a legendary, but there's no point in being 'precocious'.
Seeing the roots of the brotherhood forming is incredible! I really liked the beginning of this FanFiction, I liked the middle, but now... now is the peak! What excitement! Please tell me they will all pass the tests, don't kill anyone! Some witchy girls too! And if I could be more nosy, I wanted to know if it was possible to include a pair of twins, so after passing the Judgment they gain a kind of telepathic bond. It's an idea I had while reading the books. Thanks for the chapter!
I already understand that the MC won't be with just one girl, but please, focus more on Natasha Romanov, you personified the character well, I want to see a deeper romance with her, besides, Natasha has always been sad about not being able to have Children, is there any way to fix this?