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Comments of chapter undefined of NARUTO, Kushina's Brother

Dudian
DudianLv12Dudian

yea.. from now on I will be dodging this author fics. waste of time

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Haise_Sasaki1
Haise_Sasaki1Lv4Haise_Sasaki1

Ah well this sucks ...next fic I guess

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Tyicius
TyiciusLv14Tyicius

Get this thing out of my library.

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Gawd
GawdLv15Gawd

also i will be waiting for this fics return, because I absolutely h8 vampire diaries. almost as much as I h8 twilight.

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Tim_Tritium
Tim_TritiumLv4Tim_Tritium

sad, hope you will pick this fan fic up again in the future

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Gawd
GawdLv15Gawd

mc should deal with danzo b4 leaving the village. he is supposed to be a smart mc not a headstrong naruto... also he can get to the point of sealing space so that obito nor zetsu could get in and unseal the kuubi.

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fianlking
fianlkingLv5fianlking

Thanks for the fanfic they truly hope that you end up picking this one up again

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Kevin_Valentin
Kevin_ValentinLv1Kevin_Valentin

I mean cool, eye powers are always cool bit it seems a bit strange for it to just happen like this I don't know. It just feels kinda random there wasn't any foreshadowing of this besides giving him an adaptive body in chapter 2 but I never thought it'd lead to this.

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ForAsguard
ForAsguardLv1ForAsguard

Mmm, I am curious.... can you return afterward? That ending is basically calling for a part two... I wanted to see what manner of changes in the AU N...

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ShouGiichiLeBlanc
ShouGiichiLeBlancLv14ShouGiichiLeBlanc

Please continue this fanfic with orochimaru not going rogue. And about the eyes Sharingan with Byakugan color. Though it has the evolution of Sharingan it has the abilities of the Byakugan too.

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GaWYz
GaWYzLv2GaWYz

Uma mistura de senju, uchiha e hyuga resulta em otsutsuki

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dada_fafa
dada_fafaLv1dada_fafa

thanks

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Granville4554
Granville4554Lv15Granville4554

Well... that was unexpected after just catching up binge reading. Thanks for the chapters tho and hopefully, you can continue this story

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Morkail
MorkailLv1Morkail

Awe it was just getting good. Could we get a chapter that lays out in general terms how the story would have gone?

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IrrelevantAlex
IrrelevantAlexLv3IrrelevantAlex

Lame but it happens, tyfc

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Kevin_Ss
Kevin_SsLv2Kevin_Ss

Creo que deberias, no se, hacer que despierte y con sus "nuevos poderes" detener parte de la guerra, o podrias hacer que salve a, no se, ¿kushina?. Pero seria bueno que no lo hagas explosivamente fuerte, podrias hacerlo, aunque sea momentáneamente fuerte.

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Pocket7
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Weebish_Jedi
Weebish_JediLv4Weebish_Jedi

Basically from what I can understand from your A/N you'll be taking a break to this fanfic to tackle your other works and are waiting for feedback to if we want a rewrite? If so then I don't think there should be any rewrite other than some parts in the story where the mc doesn't act against Danzo and Hiruzen sooner.

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Tybeer
TybeerLv5Tybeer

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Travis_Btmb
Travis_BtmbLv13Travis_Btmb

tftc

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

This is so stupid. If the genetic material of shinobi worked that way, Hashirama and others could have just used it as poison against other people. Having a needle with the genetic material of three different clans stabbed into someone wouldn’t do anything. That’s beyond idiotic.