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Read this all today so he has abnormal magic which increases the amount of magic he has is that all it does? What would Super Magic have done cause I can only thing of super tear magic from overlord, also unless he still just hasn't awakened it I'm assuming it's gone because you decided it would be to op?

I'm not sure what the protagonist goal is but this could provide motivation for him he can try to create a kingdom where everyone are equals and are judged by actions not race a place where everyone can be happy Evermore and yes I got that from Ni No Kuni that game has many interesting concepts like Kingmakers etc.

...sorry I'm dumb and I don't know who the Saiyan is I'm assuming they're young so I wanna say Turles but I'm probably way off the mark😥

Hey like the story so far it seems interesting. Tbh I've been looking for stories where a person is in greek mythology either as a OC hero or a god or something along those lines. I'm glad to have found this story as it seems to be in mythology and not Percy Jackson I'm tired of seeing those type of stories. Also is this a translation sometimes it kinda reads as one if it is you've done a good job of translating it

Well if he has the Yami Yami no mi might as well give him black beards laugh introducing One Piece laughs into the world is in of itself funny just imagining some guy just hearing Zehaha then shivering in feat is funny to me

Love that this finally got updated and 3 chapters to boot. Sad that Masquerade I'd perma banned really hope that this is only until after battle city since there's more support cards and people are running the Meta version of their DM decks 4000 lp or 8000 lp should make since and woth that Masquerade wouldn't have to be banned. But of course this would have to be after battle city as Asuto has some strong decks even without Masquerade

I agree with the other commenter. Nutri seems like a given and since you seem dead set on 21 Kale Caulifla seem to be the only reasonable choice unless you chose some character from heroes like Chronoa or one of the demon character or main self insert characters but not really that sure about that. Also since Granolas' race are kinda assasian like with their eyes that make use of weakness he should study other races weakness like Namekians are weak to the sound of whistling to the point they'd rather mutilate their ears than listen to it.

Leaving this comment here I love dragon ball and while I love Toriyama and his work the man forgets a lot of what he set up. Which is where Toyotaro is like a breath of fresh air. The Moro arc was fun but the Granolah arc truly felt like old Dragon Ball Z and not super and I was kinda all for it. It's super awesome to see this new stuff get some love in the form of a fic. Also if you really wanna spice this up maybe add some DB heros content when things start moving there's some wacky stuff and the power levels are probably around the levels of Tournament of power and beyond

Alright that end joke actually made me laugh a bit 😄

Ok ik the theme is sexy and I don't know if UT was officially stated I'm assuming it is from the chapter title but if you don't do Bringing Sexy Back its a missed opportunity

If he builds a warfare maybe he'll accidentally get the attention of the Machine Gods didn't Ares lose his body or something fighting Sefar

I'm all for it she has really funny energy that seemingly contradicts the mc. It should be gradual though kinda like man she's a bit much but he eventually starts caring about what happens to her bit by bit.

Nice chapter also I don't know why but maybe it's because I've been playing the Yakuza series but I kinda want to see a story where a main character starts his own Yakuza family and well...you are in Tokyo...no one saying you can't have Yakuza elements in this story...if you can't tell I'm really into Yakuza right now😭

I think it's official that with this new chapter we've entered new territory. This is about where the previous version of the story ended I'm curious to see where we go from here.

I mean it's understandable but you have to remember fairy tales are really dangerous, they aren't as happy go lucky as one would think Farquad already has a inherent distaste for all things magical and while the Mc may not he still is wary and is just covering his bases. I'm sure that when he's more secure he'll start interacting with the world more.

You're a real one working even with a messed up hand I'm glad to see a new chapter but make sure you're taking care of yourself too

There's a lot of interesting stuff in fairy tails it doesn't necessarily have to be just from the Shrek franchise I'm genuinely curious of what comes next thanks for the chapter

Ok so I want to say I did like this story so far it has been a fun read. But tbh this story kinda reads as a crackfic. Like I get that comedy is in one of the tags but like it it has little to no seriousness at all. The mc wanting to have a comfy life is great I totally get it but he hasn't learned anything in 13 years. Like he never considered that people would read his mind even though it's a basic force power is kinda annoying. Also the mc personality is frankly all over the place it's almost like a discount Deadpool, which could be funny but it kinda comes off as slightly cringe. Idk I'd say give it a chance as it starts off strong but it may not be everyone's cup of tea.

Two chapters in a day it must be my birthday...it isn't, but I'm real glad to see this is back.