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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin3d
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    I've always been kinda foggy with naruto dates I'd probably just watch a vid on the naruto timeline or something to double check

    Ch 13 Confirmation ??
    Naruto: Talent exchange system
    Anime & Comics · Floki_Star_1199
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin4d
    Replied to Kevin_Valentin

    Sorry it's a bit much I hope you use it as this is a pretty fun ability with a lot of thought and it'd be a shame for it to not be used. If you feel it's still too OP or something then not really sure what could be changed

    Ch 10 Your opinion
    Naruto: Talent exchange system
    Anime & Comics · Floki_Star_1199
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin4d
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    Ok hi I'm the one that made the nen suggestion and I got you I though it out this ability could be his main staple ability alongside his gravity ability and if he makes it then he would only need to focus on physical abilities to supplement from now on so anyway heres the Hatsu I made. Hatsu: Thermokinesis User Name: Yato Nen Type: Specialist Hatsu Name: Thermal Symphony Explanation of the Name: The name "Thermal Symphony" reflects the user's ability to orchestrate and manipulate temperature with precision and finesse, much like a conductor orchestrates a symphony. Abilities and Mechanics: Thermokinetic Field: Range: The user can affect the temperature within a 15-meter radius. Mechanism: The user accelerates or decelerates molecules in the environment to manipulate temperature. This can create fire, ice, steam, or other thermal phenomena. Environmental Influence: Adaptation: The effectiveness of temperature manipulation is influenced by the current environment. For instance, creating ice in a desert or fire in a rainstorm is difficult but not impossible. The inverse is also true; creating ice in a cold environment or fire in a dry one is easier. The damage of these manipulations, whether favorable or unfavorable, scales accordingly. Increased Nen Output: The user can triple their Nen output to overcome environmental challenges. However, the results are still slightly weaker than they would be under neutral conditions, and this greatly increases strain and mental exhaustion. Vulnerability and Defensive Potential: Potential Application: The user can decelerate the movement of molecules in their range to reduce the damage of attacks. For example: Kinetic Force: Decelerating the molecules in the air or object to lessen the impact of physical blows. Water Attacks: Evaporating water attacks by accelerating their molecules to turn water into steam before they hit. Fire Attacks: Decelerating the molecules in fire-based attacks to reduce their intensity and temperature. Restrictions: Calculation Load: The user must continuously perform complex calculations to maintain control over the thermokinetic field. Prolonged use can lead to severe mental fatigue and reduced effectiveness. No Passive Shielding: While Thermokinesis is active, the user cannot use their Nen for passive shielding. This leaves them vulnerable to physical and Nen-based attacks. Limit on Direct Manipulation: The user cannot directly affect the molecules inside living beings. However, environmental manipulation can indirectly cause harm or benefits (e.g., heating the air to cause burns, or cooling it to cause hypothermia). Usage Examples: Offensive: Fire Creation: In a temperate environment, the user can ignite the air or nearby objects by accelerating molecules, creating intense flames to attack opponents. Ice Formation: By decelerating molecules in the moisture present in the air or ground, the user can form ice structures to trap or impale foes. Defensive: Heat Shield: Rapidly heating the air around them to create a barrier of hot air or flames to deter close-range attackers. Ice Wall: Creating walls of ice to block projectiles or provide cover. Damage Mitigation: Decelerating or accelerating molecules to lessen the impact of incoming attacks. This includes reducing kinetic force, evaporating water attacks, and cooling

    Ch 10 Your opinion
    Naruto: Talent exchange system
    Anime & Comics · Floki_Star_1199
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin6d
    Replied to RyougiShikI

    Can you provide a url or something because I don't know how to find this Tongren it just shows up as a place in China or something

    Fate: I Heard After Death, You Can Ascend to the Throne of Heroes?
    Anime & Comics · Abhii_28
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin8d
    Commented

    This story is really good not sure how bad the original is or how much effort is going into this translation but so far no complaints.

    Ch 9 He is Jason!
    Fate: I Heard After Death, You Can Ascend to the Throne of Heroes?
    Anime & Comics · Abhii_28
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin8d
    Replied to Kevin_Valentin

    *her sorry on mobile

    Ch 5 Thoughts??
    Naruto: Talent exchange system
    Anime & Comics · Floki_Star_1199
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin8d
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    Yeah Hanabi is interesting never really thought about jer but now that I have I kinda like it. I'd suggest it be a slow burn type of relationship The mc has a deadline and is treated poorly even if he has an older mentality he has the emotional capacity of a child. So he shouldn't jump into a relationship or friendship right away. As for abilities perhaps he can Devolop one of the 6th powers life return and use it to develop his own form of Nen. That way he doesn't have to buy it but still works for it.

    Ch 5 Thoughts??
    Naruto: Talent exchange system
    Anime & Comics · Floki_Star_1199
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin15d
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    Kinda late but I just remembered that he took over a branch of Yakuza and I know that he can create abilities but an ability like Overhaul would help mitigate some problems. He could use it to make himself more durable, heal others and take others abilities it would also allow him to alter and change the battlefield without having to make a domain

    Ch 40 Aftermath
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
    Anime & Comics · Yesnth
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin17d
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    Hey love this story only thing is that Maha is not Zigg but it's believed Zigg is Maha's son or maybe sibling Maha is Great Great Grandpa while Zeno is Grandpa we don't know Zeno's parents

    Ch 29 Return [2]
    A Wanderer's Lies
    Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin21d
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    This is just my rambling so feel free to ignore me especially since his Haki is only to organ level and not cells but it made me think if haki iis Willpower he could totally make his own version of Jenova ccells by infusing haki into them and control people that share his cells DNA

    Ch 100 [100] A Legend
    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin28d
    Commented

    I've been checking daily for this, I'm way to hyped for this duel there's something special about Kaiba getting owned weather it's a female version or not.

    Ch 10 VS Kaiba the BEWD Yandere
    Yu-Gi-Oh!...Wait What?
    Anime & Comics · AzhelianTheEternal
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
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    Hey I'm not sure if it'd be taboo or something but it would be interesting to make a sentient cursed weapon or something like the Demon weapons from soul eater and it can have the cursed ability of resonance allowing one to fight beyond their means as long as they can match cursed energy wavelengths

    Ch 34 1 Month
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
    Anime & Comics · Yesnth
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
    Commented

    I think Personally he'd be a dual class Luke how semiramis is caster/ assasian he'd be Beast/Ruler

    Ch 65 *Small Question to the community*
    Ultimate Herrsher in DxD
    Anime & Comics · Shonpufi
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
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    Ik the chapters are written in advance and Orion doesn't care about how the rings are used but a good way of regulating them is to only produce a set amount and distribute them to certain people or schools. Then Orion could allow people to rent them not buy them so that way he keeps making money off of them and they can keep track of who has the rings

    Ch 186 Chapter 186 : Playfull Day
    HP: Magic Punk
    Book&Literature · kamidemond
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
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    I can only say she got you a ring...she's a keeper that's hella based

    Ch 23 Notice! The final one before a new chapter....i hope
    Yugioh GX: Flexing? I'm just META Traumatised.
    Anime & Comics · TheOneThatNeverWas
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
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    Maybe I'm dumb but I find this a bit hard to read. Just the way everything is structured makes it a bit hard for me to follow the chapter where he was narrating future events is a good example of this I couldn't tell what was going on and thought you decided to do a massive jump cut, I've seen stories do that before so I wasn't sure. Other than that it would be cool if there was a pic of the mc I was following along til you said blue hair so is the appearance just Rimirru I'm not sure.

    Overlord: Еmptiness
    Anime & Comics · Lord_Citxow
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
    Commented

    I mean depends patreon is good because it allows usually early access and even if you don't get consistent donations a bunch of people donating for a single month is better than none but if you do I'd set up resonable prices.

    Ch 16 16: State of mind
    Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]
    Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
    Posted

    Story is really good only issue was a few of the character names in the early beginning but overall story seems to be fun. I really like stories that take place jn the Arthur Era. I do have to wonder if this is a translation though I'd be interested to find the original but frankly I have no idea how to find those type of stories.

    King Arthur Won't Die by Accident
    Anime & Comics · Trash_Prospector
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin1mth
    Commented

    Ah ok it was real confusing I was like who's Jaba I was picturing the guy from star wars. But his name is Scopper Gaban

    Ch 1 Apprentice Pirates Of the Roger Pirates
    King Arthur: a trainee Of Roger's Regiment
    Anime & Comics · The_Creator223
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  • Kevin_Valentin
    Kevin_Valentin2mth
    Commented

    I typically don't read stories until they have more chapters so I can read them in one go but this concept kinda interested me. I've been getting into Honkai/Hoyoverse through fanfics, and Danmachi is pretty good base for xover fanfic material. I'm interested to see where this story goes.

    Ch 1 Prologue: A Memory from the Distant Future
    Is it Wrong to Trailblaze in the Dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · Wryyyyyyyy
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