Comments of chapter undefined of Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
Saintbarbido
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why does he have a system when his powers are innate? author i want to like your story but what is the point of a system?? we the readers just want to see a guy with shazams powers having fun. the solomon part was already weird enough since shazams a dc character it makes no sense for dc solomon to appear like that. most of shazams powers come from the rock of eternity and less from the gods directly. the rock being the source of all dc mysticism means even IF dc gods didn’t want to their powers end up being given to the whoever is blessed by the rock. this is why i think having solomon appear like that is already weird and non sensical. its sad but most of the comments here on webnovel are from readers who are either bots or children who won’t even give you feedback. the totally obvious and forced confrontation in the alley was also terrible. i’d pay money to see a dc or marvel fanfic show an actual realistic persons response. in real life a person wouldn’t waste their time going into an alley like that. i get its a fanfic but having the mc just go completely out of character like that to push the story is not good writing. if you are gonna use a si or human from the real world atleast try to make their actions look realistic. if mc is just going to be a moral bot and run head long into action the story will become bland really fast. its always better to subvert the readers expectations then follow bland storylines.
