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Comments of chapter undefined of Beyond the Limits I Became a Ninja in Naruto

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Sloth_Incarnate
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All this comes off incredibly forced

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SsMarine
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Trash mc

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TruthHurtsX1000
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Mc is too naive and its annoying.

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Daoisto0M3es
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I don't know, mc really should teach everyone his own technique ?

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Firelord
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the Mc feels like a yes man

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Yardigan
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This novel is perfect for those who likes a character that has the personality of naruto and luffy, which means naive from chapters 1 to the to 1000 and when you think there is gonna be character development you realize the character is still the same. Like naruto is a true child, this dude is an adult, the author is gonna justify his naive behaviors by maybe saying his memories are lost or something but overall its a 3/5 so far for me, and I wouldn't let myself suffer the whole friendship and learning from mistakes development because I 100% know the character is still gonna be like naruto. I understand that the authors wants a good character development but the one you are building is for fairy tail and pokemon, not the world of ninjas that I came here for. Good luck on your other novels.

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rawthentic
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whats with the goody two shoes Character. i dont like edgy MCs but this is just completely lame. author you are a good writer interms of grammar and sentences but i think you should redo this story with a more realistic undertone. this novel is basically a children's book.

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MapleHinataSyrup
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Yeahhhh I don't know why but I feel like the words are trying to tell me something too idk, something too one sided or something I just a feeling that something is off idk

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Mercurio
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A_Y_Z_16
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thank you for the chapter

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Azathoth2
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Thanks for the chapter đŸ„°

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Jack_Frost_3962
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Good chapter

Zero93
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Thanks for chapter