itachi was a kage level ninja at 12 soo...
lol nice joke
most anbu's are chunin, anbu captains are joinins
one character which means no harem(2+), that's good because the mc's personality doesn't match those other character who fetch around 2 or more girls plus you'll have to adjust his personality for just 1 much less 2.
fire, lightning, earth
The system is just there as a guide until he has captain level combat. After that is gonna leave.
😂 😂Imagine what you can do with just half the luck of these protagonist, first of all, you're destined not to died until you accomplish your dream(that's op) like immortality except without the long life part.
To get rid of the Seastones weakness too. But I have to agree with you on that one.
Really, I honestly have only seen one, which was a naruto fan-fic.
Author Here, I see other authors doing this so I'm gonna take a crack at it. This is my first novel(on this website), and although I'm doing this for fun, I wouldn't mind feedback that will help me improve my writing. I've seen readers give feedback to authors that have nothing to do with their writing style or improving the story. As for stability of updates, that's gonna be slow because this is just a hobby of mine unless it turns profitable then maybe I might upload 100 chapters in 1 week lol. Feel free to ask any questions down below
The thing is, I'll have to endure a personality I don't like for 20 or maybe more chapters. I see you like slow personality development so even when it changes, I can tell you're gonna make it slow too.
I understand that but itachi was a kage level ninja at 12, and kakashi was approaching that level at that age had he not take obito's eye which drains his chakra.
5 stars for writing quality, 5 stars for stability of updates, I liked the story development in the first chapter but the mc drags the story development down to 1 star for me, the character design should be 5 stars but I gave it 1 stars, why? well I really wanted to give it zero from an opinion standpoint because it is the main reason I quit the novel. I hate with a passion characters like naruto and luffy, who are naive, has experience things that should make them mature but still after 17 years of growth is still the same character who thinks of the ninja world as pokemon, all sunshine and rainbow. I like characters like kakashi, which is a balance between good and neutral evil. Not the you killed my mom and dad but I forgive you and not just that, come live with me and be the ruler of the village who's 4th ruler you killed. I'm a very passionate reader, and like I said you are a good author, its the mc and direction of your story that turned me away, but a lot of readers like characters like yours, so good luck.
This novel is perfect for those who likes a character that has the personality of naruto and luffy, which means naive from chapters 1 to the to 1000 and when you think there is gonna be character development you realize the character is still the same. Like naruto is a true child, this dude is an adult, the author is gonna justify his naive behaviors by maybe saying his memories are lost or something but overall its a 3/5 so far for me, and I wouldn't let myself suffer the whole friendship and learning from mistakes development because I 100% know the character is still gonna be like naruto. I understand that the authors wants a good character development but the one you are building is for fairy tail and pokemon, not the world of ninjas that I came here for. Good luck on your other novels.