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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3h
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    i guessed right haha. now he should think to c9mbine them and become a storm user. maybe add fire later to it too

    Author's thoughts: Alan has finally learned a spell for his wind element.
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    My Godly Ascension
    Fantasy · ALU_cArD
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3h
    Commented

    i say wind and then with wind and lightning, he can be a storm user + swordsman

    Spoiler: Lightning is not the only attribute he will awaken, try guessing the other attribute and comment your guess below.
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    My Godly Ascension
    Fantasy · ALU_cArD
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic7h
    Commented

    that was such an amazing chapter. the details of the convention were very well written.

    Ch 19 Chapter Nineteen
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    The barber:Dc
    others · John_Len_2493
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic16h
    Replied to TheFanficGod

    i still disagree but i understand your point of view author. anyway this new plot is pretty crazy

    Really though, who would be stupid enough to use those eyes? Not only is it annoying as bitch, it will also turn me into an emo. For real? I will become an edgelord. The idea makes me shiver. No thank you. I am good as I am. Killing Sasuke and removing him from the whole plot was the best thing I could do though.
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic17h
    Commented

    how would that maki him emp?? there were plenty of normal uchiha as well. like shisui? mikoto? izumi? etc etc etc

    Really though, who would be stupid enough to use those eyes? Not only is it annoying as bitch, it will also turn me into an emo. For real? I will become an edgelord. The idea makes me shiver. No thank you. I am good as I am. Killing Sasuke and removing him from the whole plot was the best thing I could do though.
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic17h
    Commented

    he could have collected a few more maybe for a future izanami

    "Hell to the no! Sharingan? I don't need that sick eye. It is a curse that is what it is. I don't want it. No! No universe, no gods, no to everyone. This is the second time I was offered this, but no! I don't fucking want Sharingan."
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic17h
    Commented

    thats pretty stupid. nagato and orignal akatsuki all had terrible backgrounds. zabuza and kisame from the mist left due to betrayals. ofc there are pure bad guys like danzo but there are others who closed their hearts due to terrible pasts

    Finally, it was my turn. I stood up, my eyes shining with determination. "My name is Koushin," I said confidently while beaming a smile. "I like training and hanging out with Naruto. I dislike evil characters with sad backgrounds, and my dream is to be the best version of myself so I wouldn't fail myself. My famous quote is 'Evil characters cannot have a sad past!'"
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic17h
    Commented

    dont disrespect neji like that. he got screwed by everyone, including the writer. he was used as a character foil to make naruto shine during chunin exams

    I tapped my chin, deep in thought. "Well, obviously I gotta get my Chakra Control up. That's like the foundation of everything, right? But instead of using perk points from the get-go, I should focus on training it by myself at first to see if I can acquire these perks without using Perk Points. If I can, that would be extremely delightful. And then I gotta work on my elemental affinity. Can't be a weak-ass Shinobi without an element! Who am I, Iruka? Sakura? Neji? Tenten? Wow, lots of shitty characters in this world."
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic18h
    Commented

    a man who CANT grow facial hair is just a boy.

    I added some muscles, fixed the hair to a cool style. Made it so, I wouldn't grow facial hair and increased the height. Eyes a little bit slanted, straight eyebrows and lips looking handsome. With it, I was done.
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic19h
    Replied to Hanilix
    *congratulations you have received 3000 members of the military organization "task force 141", with Simon "Ghost" Riley as commander*
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    marvel's dictator
    Movies · NoDress
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic21h
    Commented

    thank you so much for the chapter. this going to be such an exciting arc :)

    Ch 34 Chunin Tournament Ends
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    Start From Naruto: Shino the Dominator
    Anime & Comics · Fluffypie
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic2d
    Commented

    im curious about adams family situation

    "Hello, mother. I am here to say sorry. It seems like I might have to break a promise to you and mom. But I will do my best to not do so."
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    God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
    Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic2d
    Commented

    do you know some software licenses cost upwards to 10000$ - $50000. this is litterally giving it away for free. how many years will he have to keep the service running to barely make $100000?? is the author insane??

    Stage 5: Enterprise - Custom pricing (Starts at $1000 but increases based on their needs)
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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
    Commented

    i missed this novel. thank you, author, for the chapters. the criminal chase scene was pretty exciting, but i feel you should spend more time exploring the uchiha police setting now, instead of reverting back to the underground fights.

    Ch 109 CH_4.9 (109)
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    Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
    Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
    Commented

    thank you for the chapter :)

    Ch 17 Ch-17 Gravity Field
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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
    Commented

    i cant beleive it took this long but finally some action and war. im super excited to read this arc

    Ch 408 Prelude to War (Part-2)
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    Herald of Steel
    War&Military · FerriticMatrix
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
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    i read to ch 35, and i can honestly recommend you dont waste your time with this novel. MC had his whole family brutally murdered and is almost an adult but acts like an 8 year old. he is immature, doesnt care abut the seriousness of his situation and all around dislikable character. the character interactions are even worse as even old men act like children and it makes me feel second hand embarrassment from reading it. i have read much better chinese novels with repetitive plots.

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    My Qi Keeps Resetting
    Fantasy · leeroycgna
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
    Commented

    this mc is more annoying and entitled the with every passing chapter. he is not even a cultivator yet and he acts like this

    Seething, Michael almost ripped the paper to shreds. Fortunately he managed to reign in his anger in time before looking down at the list.
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    My Qi Keeps Resetting
    Fantasy · leeroycgna
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
    Commented

    what is with the character interactions?? they feel so childish. im getting second jand embarrassment just from reading this. is the novel supposed to be serious or a complete joke?? im not even trying to be harsh but this feels worse than a chinese novel

    Ch 13 Changes to the Book
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    My Qi Keeps Resetting
    Fantasy · leeroycgna
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  • rawthentic
    rawthentic3d
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter but i think you should use the next 2-4 chapters further developing the plot and setting

    Ch 2 Ch-02 Checking Progress
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    Uchihas way to become a King
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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