JManM
Maybe my only regret is that in the end he didn't have a really special person for him, just people he basically created (his children) and wives he didn't really love, only appreciated at best. I'm not complaining about the children, for me it was the best thing about this story BY FAR, but I would have liked a surprise, someone who would move the bear's heart and make it difficult for him but would stay in the end. Excellent story author, I hope you focus your next story on someone more "human", more receptive to the feelings of those who appreciate him... And that he doesn't have a multitude of children that we don't know with a multitude of women that we don't know, please.
This is probably the best Game of Thrones Fanfic on this platform, it's so enjoyable to read an MC that actually does whatever it takes to win and survive cause no matter how many times other MCs try to act ruthless, it's easy to see they still have reservations, Jorah is the complete embodiment of Victory at all cost and he has proven that he has the will to achieve it. Thanks for the novel Jmann, your work is greatly appreciated đ.
Again in your author's notes you're complaining about wanting criticism I can understand that though I doubt you care is just your very good at what you write so that could largely be why you're not getting that much criticism again I don't really that often read the comments it's just in my personal opinion you are just very good at what you writing especially because what you write is very unique at least your style of writing is very unique
Congratulations on completing the story and my thanks for sharing it. Jorah was indeed a complete monster but in the world of monsters you only really reach the top by becoming one yourself (Without the usual plot convenience of fanfiction or the main character practically starting at the peak already of course) Most of his choices felt real and it was like reading a man going on a downwards spiral from his first ever raid into the lands beyond the wall and it was done in a very satisfying way. All in all it was one of the more unique fanfictions I've read and I mean that in the most positive way possible.