Then your fic is gonna be longer than the original novels 😂. Which again is going to lead everyone to think it’s never going to be finished. I don’t want to read 200 chapters just for him to FINALLY be considered an adult in this world. His character doesn’t bother me but so far it’s just been craziness, and it’s so early on there isn’t really any development.

😂 at chapter 17 and hasn’t been updated in a month…..right this one definitely will. It’s sad because this is an interesting premise for a GoT fic.

Character design is 1 star and story development is 1 star for reasons mentioned above.

World building is 5 stars since it’s GRRMs world. And update stability is 4 stars since it’s 2 chaps a week. Writing quality is 3 stars, average is every way. Also the author is allergic to using “” for dialogue. Character development is 1 star.

Overall this is one of the worst GoT fics I’ve read. The mc makes tons idiotic decisions, while the author tries to make him seem extremely intelligent. The pacing is slower then any other GoT fic I’ve read. 25000+ words and the mc is like 3 years old. Don’t come into this expecting any sort of realism. It feels like a 10 year old writing his power fantasy. I’m sure the author is also deleting any non 5 star reviews, there were a ton of people upset with this story, yet no negative reviews. You’ll never grow author if you only except the praise and not the criticism.

20K+ words in and he’s still only 3??? Even the original books weren’t this dang slow. Get on with it already.

How long is he going to be a toddler/young child. The longer the story goes on with him being this young, the less interesting it is. Already all realism has been thrown out the window. You dragging out this baby/child arc is just dropping the quality more.

Fix the synopsis ffs. So many errors just in the description of the novel. That’s gonna turn many away from the story.

Why did you leave discord?

Well that’s a lame “power”

Add more tags. Is he a hero, antihero, or villain. Is there a system? Is there romance ect… There’s tags for pretty much everything.

It was good while it lasted. However it seems to be abandoned or the author died. Hopefully not and they will return to finish it one day.

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Lmao

I just find it hilarious that you have such a hard time believing someone can be handsome. It’s not a myth.

You know there are handsome people in the world right? Just because you aren’t doesn’t mean no one is. I get what you’re saying though, it is overused af in these Chinese webnovels.

There’s not even a point of writing a fanfic if literally everything stays the same. Have some imagination, change the story how you would want to see it change. Keeping exactly to cannon with little to no change defeats the purpose of it being a fanfiction.

Rank*

Is t bone a captain or a colonel? You keep changing his title.

Why do you use [] instead of “”?