Big improvement thank you

Freya is going to get massacred so hard she won't be able to even see it

If he's smart he'll and assuming he gets out on time he'll be able to stop the birth of slaanesh

He either killed aizen or a illusion

Now I. Wo derived g if Medusa is going to be saved by the hunter or mercy killed

You can't convince me he doesn't have a harem even if he's not aware of it

That is so f****** true this will have me chuckling for a good day or two

Even if the chapters are a little short for my liking this is still incredibly well written and I thank you for it

This s***'s about to get fun

I always did love whenever you have a story where you got a real bro/dude (real life not an anime bro) in an anime setting it if done well is so much fun

Again in your author's notes you're complaining about wanting criticism I can understand that though I doubt you care is just your very good at what you write so that could largely be why you're not getting that much criticism again I don't really that often read the comments it's just in my personal opinion you are just very good at what you writing especially because what you write is very unique at least your style of writing is very unique

Body mods

Agreed and to be honest I'm dying to see what jmann has in store for us with a multiverse like worm to be honest I've always wanted hum to make a warhammer primarch with lizard daddy taking over pertrabo

Okay not quite as satisfying but I like it I like it very very much for what it's worth it's probably much better than my whole kill her and whatnot but still I like this honestly the one change I would like would be if he could somehow make Gilgamesh be less arrogant that would be absolutely awesome

I'm very much down for that oh that would be awesome they're both level 10 equivalent along with literal primordial power oh that would be sick

Thanks for the chapter

Was either doing research or just collecting his thoughts

As awesome of an author as he is he still has a life outside of writing fiction

You know what would be funny it would be funny if Belle never figured out until he got his cheat ability that AIS is taken that will be hilarious

Who is he going to summon