Comments of chapter undefined of Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

The grammar and description are solid.

What a cliffhanger!

I say, that was a great beginniing.

I’ve never seen a prologue like this it’s wonderfully unique. Your writing style is great

Great start!

Felt like, I was reading poetry. So, captivating.

It makes me wonder if the tune he played was the last good thing he remembered of his father. This prologue give me the vibe that something terrible happened and his father was among those who had fallen. Heart wrenching at the start, then tear jerking at the end.

Loving this prologue - it adds intrigue to the story. Starting with the tales and then the unexpected ending at the end.

I liked the drama in this chapters but I hope to see some more conversations.

Bruh, bruh. This is bewitching. Fantastic.

It was good, but I reckon you to split each sentences into different paragraph. So the reader could digest and understanding the sentences even better without scrolling up & down countlessly.

A touching chapter, but a great start!

That's... really sad.

I still have no clue what is going on, but it look promising

Nice prologue, straight to the point as always.

Okay that was such a lovely page! I actually didn't expect that! Your writing skills are amazing as well.