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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Back in Ancient Times

Buxwiel
BuxwielLv3Buxwiel

Thanks for chapter!

TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2TruthHurtsX1000

Why always multiverse ugh... Hope it turns out good instead of a wish fulfillment

Porthos10
Porthos10Lv13Porthos10

Why on this platform the good stories are dropped and the Wish fulfillment OP MC at the start stories are commonspread? A goodbye after another disappointment šŸ˜ž

space_duck
space_duckLv1space_duck

You're just a failed writer. You want to write a Wuxia novel, but you don't know how, and then you thought of writing a Naruto fan fiction and adding whatever oriental fantasy you can think of. Or you are stealing this novel from one of the foolish Chinese authors

Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1Zenos_Maxima2611

Dude, death is destiny from God. If your MC is depressed because of the death of his parents, then he is not close to God (atheist). If he is close, then he will accept it gracefully. Also, I feel that your perception of God is also incorrect, isn't it. We (including me) don't know what God looks like, because we humans are lower than God. Even a prophet like Moses (peace upon him), only seeing God's light immediately fainted on the spot (the event of Moses' revelation on Mount Sinai), especially your MC when he saw God? this lowly atheist creature? more noble and higher than the prophets?

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

Welp Iā€™m waiting for this to be bad before I drop

Pedro_Vitor_4966
Pedro_Vitor_4966Lv1Pedro_Vitor_4966

He doesn't having karma doesn't make sense His father-in-law must hate him, so it would generate negative karma, he helped to pay his mother's treatment, so it would generate positive karma, at the same way, he gave up at school to take care of his mother, so it would generate positive karma

DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13DriftingDragon

Hopefully he visits new worlds not the usual onepiece. Although itā€™s a goated anime/manga, itā€™s getting repetitive in fanfics.

GoldenZega606
GoldenZega606Lv1GoldenZega606

Great chapter, also knowing how the story is going to go, you can absorb chakra or a method similar to the Magic Arch of the incarnation, your knowledge and the different beings can help.

eschantor
eschantorLv3eschantor

Although I am not a Christian but out of trillion of humans in the entire universe the God chose someone who has a little good karma. It would have been better to just let him die and some how he is reincarnated. Because nobody can explain reincarnation so there would not have been this big rant on the comment section.

Ptanja_Khondee
Ptanja_KhondeeLv1Ptanja_Khondee

Again.. Why god again...

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

DaoistUKlG2H
DaoistUKlG2HLv1DaoistUKlG2H

ŠŠ°Š“ŠµŃŽŃŃŒ тут Š½Šµ Š±ŃƒŠ“ŠµŃ‚ Š³Š°Ń€ŠµŠ¼Š°*

Josh_Tyle122345667
Josh_Tyle122345667Lv1Josh_Tyle122345667

3wishes are always to much in these fanfics

calsion
calsionLv2calsion

nooooo not another mutiverse well time to drop this ig bro could have wished for talent cause hes not even guarenteed to have chakra like hes probably never even gonna get enough to travel between worlds well ofc he is since this is a bad wish fulliment

OLB
OLBLv3OLB

espero que termine apenas no mundo de Naruto, salto de mundo Ć© uma merda cara

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

Buen capitulo

Anandakifanaanna
AnandakifanaannaLv2Anandakifanaanna

lanjutkan cerita mu Thor

Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4Reiya9

When he says the price is the energy in his body what does that even mean? Will he lose his energy and have to start over? Or is it like casting a huge spell that uses your mana but regenerates after a while? Not very clear here

carlos435
carlos435Lv5carlos435

since I would have like to travel to some worlds just to have some fun then leave, this wish is awesome for me and since choosing the world and timeline counts as wishes then I guess he made What he thought was best....