- "Do you write to please yourself or your readers?"
This is a question that would save a lot of trouble if authors asked themselves before publishing any story on this site.
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Tell me if there's something more than otsutsukis in this, I don't want to be disappointed by having a "surprise"
the end of the synopsis isn't hooking me
Could you give a summary of the first volume? I honestly don't even remember anything at all and I'm not sure if this volume really works for those who haven't read the other one If it works I'll delete this comment)
it's like the other guy there said about Taijutsu, and the same applies to swords, I mean, you just need to cut, you don't need fancy names and everything 🤣
just know how to attack and defend, it all comes down to speed, strength and good defense
It really hasn't become more interesting. This is as far as I can go before I explode with frustration
these are the same problems as the Naruto fanfic