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Worn_out_by12hCommentedThe other sibling just at the nest like huh where everybody at
Quickly the new men that arrived had picked Evelyn's parents up, while Vorigos grabbed Evelyn's brother and Karsyn took ahold of Evelyn who was as still as a statue.- Worn_out_by13hCommented
It’s just annoying how the author makes her act
'I know that my adventurism got me in trouble before, but this time is different.' - Worn_out_by13hCommented
Too much dramatics
'Is she not going to save me? Have I been deemed a failure?' Evelyn thought, as she counited to fall and her mother made no move to help her. - Worn_out_by14hCommented
Wel you dumb so
'Great, am I going to die again. Just when I had finally come to terms with being an owl, this happens. And I was actually really looking forward to flying.' - Worn_out_by16hCommented
Bad spelling off rip and wishes off rip yep confirmed going to be a bad fic
Now for my wishes I have to really think deeply about what I want as I'm not very smart I have just the thing to help me "For my first wish I whish to have the ability of Great Sage from Tensura" This wish opens so many possibilities for me that no matter what world I go it will be extremely helpful. - Worn_out_by16hCommented
Any fanfic with wishes always ends up bad before it starts
" You're right I am but a random omnipotent being and as the show goes for my entertainment I shall grant you 3 wishes and you shall put the most grandiose of shows". - Worn_out_by20hCommented
Meh kinda hope he doesn’t stay contracted
With his newfound abilities, he knew exactly how to use them and what to do to save himself and his contractor, Bel. - Worn_out_by20hCommented
As it was already named that
"OK, I have decided, I will call you Ossa. It means bones, you know because you are made of bones," she announced, feeling rather proud of herself. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Yeah wish she was more than just a trophy because the author made it seem like she was a good fashion designer but than proceeds to just relegate her to 1900’s wife duty
She has a thin waist, not a waist like the models in his previous life, but a healthy and beautiful waist that is well-proportioned to the rest of her body. Being very tall, she has long and full legs and a prominent and well-proportioned back. As for the chest, due to Vijay's hard work, he had brought her from a C cup to a 32D cup. Vijay smiled as Kavya walked towards him with a sway that made him crazy. He watched the chest shake with each step, and the barely visible slit on the chest made it more tempting, *gulp*; he has completely fallen for this woman, who could very well be the most beautiful in the world, his wife. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
It would be nice if she interacted with characters known and the city in general
She has a height of 5 feet 6 inches (167.64 cm), which is considered tall among women, with black eyes and hair like a waterfall cascading down to her waist. She also has Maratha women's features on her face, giving her expression a little zing. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Wow we finally see her after how many chapters? might as wel get rid of her or add her to scenes where he isn’t there because she has no significance in anything except feeding mc
He thought to himself as he picked up a towel, which was on the wooden shelf nearest to him. As he wiped away the sweat on his body, Kavya arrived bringing with her a powder of Shikakai (Acacia concinna, Used as shampoo). Kavya has grown a lot since he married her at the age of 16; now she is 20 years old. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
No haley
Ted's face twitched and he turned serious. Edward continued, "There's already two people who can't stand to be with me. Sometimes, I wonder, if there is someone out there that can really accept me." - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Hope he doesn’t end up with Haley or something it’s way too basic
Edward opened his eyes slightly, his gaze turned conflicted. After a few seconds, he muttered, "Our relationship was problematic from the start. She's always had reservations, and we just didn't really click well." - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Seriously can you just get rid of the Queen? No one remembers her name as she is never shown or mentioned it’s honestly dumb to have him marry then have no writing of her being in the city maybe running into people literally anything to make her an actually fleshed out character because characters you have in a couple chapters are more fleshed out
Ch 138 Portuguese Merchants Visit Part : 5 (END) - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Implement something similar to either military court or do what the Roman’s did and have them beat their own squad members if they are found doing such heinous acts
Originally, he did not want to join the separatist movement, but something happened that made him join. After the incident in the morning, he was questioned for a bit and set free. So, he went on his way to return home. When he got back home, he saw a Vijayanagara soldier running away from inside his house. He got scared, and when he went inside the house, his world collapsed as he stumbled to the ground because he could see his 14-year-old daughter had been ruined. The bed was bloody, and there were choke marks on her delicate neck. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Honestly pretty sure they could make a machine gun type weapon with a crank while using musket balls will it take a minute to reload? Yes but will it devastate a charging enemy also yes it would take one of those things to simulate having 12+ rifle men fire
With his shout, the soldiers sprang into action, charging with all their might in formation, resembling a human cavalry. Their momentum reached its peak as they crossed the breached wall. Mustafa anticipated a splatter of blood on the other side, but only a few cannon shots were heard. Unconcerned about the cannons as they had little effect on the charging army, he believed only a few soldiers might be killed. However, his face soon turned pale as rhythmic gunfire echoed. "Bang, bang, bang." Bewildered by the unfamiliar sound, horror-filled him as he realized it wasn't good, accompanied by the shouts and curses of his panicking army as they perceived it as some curse or divine intervention. This could only mean that it is a new weapon in use. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
That thing will be a ship destroyer
Considering all these ideas and pondering the circumstances at hand, Vijay decisively issued a directive, explicitly expressing his desire with the words, "What I want you to do is meticulously design a cannon similar to this existing model, ensuring it is affixed to a circular movement platform. Additionally, I want you to enhance the materials used, making them resistant to rust. This important task is left to you, as there is an urgent need for these upgraded cannons in our naval vessels." - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Needs someone on improving the grenades
Vijay nodded his head in approval. Another design bureau joined the military system of Vijayanagara along with the Boswell-designed bureau. He has decided to establish design bureaus instead of government laboratories, with the aim of actively engaging private individuals in shaping the future of weapons. This strategic decision is anticipated to accelerate progress within Vijayanagara. While these design studios enjoy a degree of autonomy in terms of theoretical access to information, the practical aspects of experimentation and manufacturing are entrusted to the empire's own factories and Vijay's armoury, ensuring a level of confidentiality. - Worn_out_by2dCommented
Oooh I forgot that unlike eroupe India and many other countries used war elephants I still hope they use the cannons on forts though
The soldier who heard Vijay's question quickly calmed down and answered, "Your Highness, I was born in a small mountain village near Kedarnath. Our village is surrounded by forests on all four sides, and we have a culture of raising elephants to do some of our work. So, I think a grown elephant is perfectly capable of pulling this cannon single-handedly."