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Comments of chapter undefined of Primogenitor in Marvel

notist
notistLv13notist

Worst character to start with so far

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TanveerBilling2002
TanveerBilling2002Lv13TanveerBilling2002

Great stuff, the language is a bit unrealistic but I am sure you will improve with practice

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Arthur_Souza
Arthur_SouzaLv4Arthur_Souza

I loved it, I don't see a good story and I think 5 is a perfect number for the harem when I put it on but it's very rushed like there's no space for the characters to interact, thanks for the work and I hope thousand chapters

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Mafahl
MafahlLv1Mafahl

this is so unrealistic but this is fiction so it's ok

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kilgan
kilganLv5kilgan

cool approach. good chapter and story

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reader12143546
reader12143546Lv10reader12143546

Ty for the chapter author sama

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Juto
JutoLv14Juto

📖👍

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Visrow
VisrowLv14Visrow

Thanks for the chapter!!

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sheshumaru
sheshumaruLv3sheshumaru

Genial

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LifelessMan
LifelessManLv5LifelessMan

Thanks

Akatsuki_3559
Akatsuki_3559Lv4Akatsuki_3559

why is he so randomly interested

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Akatsuki_3559
Akatsuki_3559Lv4Akatsuki_3559

this is mcu carol right??

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Dagda
DagdaLv6Dagda

ty

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Volhter
VolhterLv3Volhter

TFTC❤

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I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13I_Love_Hina

Dunno, I mean in rapper terms then you're the overrated rapper who has all the bling, women, and expensive stuff and not the OG rappers who's oozing swag.

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Marcus_whatever
Marcus_whateverLv2Marcus_whatever

Gud

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Nildred
NildredLv4Nildred

Thanks for the chapter

Zachariah_Browning_8961
Zachariah_Browning_8961Lv1Zachariah_Browning_8961

He should improve and upgrade his cars to run on electricity or an Arc reactor powered by his Fifth Familiar

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Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv13Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

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Dredd44
Dredd44Lv13Dredd44

grammar/editing is bad , hopefully it will improve

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Trafford
TraffordLv6Trafford

What is Mc's surname?