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Story-wise, the plot and ideas are good. The fanfic has a nice pretext, and you rarely see the Hellbody fanfics, even though they are crossovers It's a shame that this fanfic already has too many crossovers within it... Hellboy itself is a very large universe of shitton of comics already... The bad thing is that... the story is absolutely unreadable... the grammar, stylization, divisions of the text into paragraphs, punctuations, capitalizations of the letters, and so on... is way worse than MTL.
Yeah, but even at the start of the Sardau Tribe during the times of the Old Empire, when the Salusa Secundus was rising to prominence, they practised even more brutal regimes... considering the fact that there were only a few tens of thousands of Sardaukar even at their peak... the precise numbers are unclear, because only the Imperial Standart Legion had 30,000 members at all times, the numbers of other units varied greatly... and when you consider that whole Salusa Secundus had population of around 5 million and not even probably something around 2% of it were full-fledged Sardaukar
The fact that they still managed to remain relevant even during the early times of the Leto II. Atreides the God Emperor spoke volume of their strength... not to mention even during the scattering many of their lineages prevailed and even the God Emperor's Fish Speakers had some Sardaukar blood in them...
Yeah... compared to the Fremen and Feydakin they fell short by a great degree... Overall, the Fremen were greater combatants and far more dangerous than the Sardaukar... and cultivating one Sardaukar took too long, not to mention, due to the process of their creation, there were actually not that numerous from the start...
But such act would inevitably lead him to clash against the Muad'Dib's Jihad or not?
MC could also prominent figure within the Muad'Dib's Jihad... like there were many position within the Butlerian Jihad, like something akin to Grand Patriarch or Supreme Bashar
It would be good to find a different solution to that... perhaps just partial terraformation and creating of some Oasis?
If you think about it, it is really ironic thing that the generations-long wish of the Fremen basically destroyed their own society and broke their people because they were cut from their roots...
Terra was officially destroyed in the Year 13,402 BG when a huge planetoid asteroid hit Terra and destroyed the planet...
Yeah, it would also not suit the universe as well... the ultimate power of the Duneverse was the Kwizatz Haderach as the "Ultimate Power" by the words of Mother Superior Mohaim, so having MC with some powerful ability of other Universe would destroy the feeling of the Dune in the end... Dune itself already has plenty of interesting ability and also the potential in Gene-Engineering
Having acess to the Genetic Memories of his Earthen Ancestors would be enough; just imagine having access to the technologies that humanity built at their peak, before the Revolt of the Thinking Machines and the Era of the Synchronized Empire... that comes in hand with a certain degree of Prescience and ability of Voice, though for that, he would need to be once again part of the Bene Gesserit Breeding Program, as all evolution of the humanity comes from there... With the knowledge of the humanity at their golden peak you could push the technological limits of the Humanity to a greater degree... for me personally I would like to see the different fate for the Fremen, because in the end, their culture basically died out and everything that made them so unique and feared across the known universe perished with the change on the Arrakis. Not to mention with his Genetic Memories of Earth, he could provide the artificial melange like Bene Tleilax did somewhere around 15,000 AG...