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Read books
needs editing ASAP
needs better editing
barely an inconvenience
how does a 3 month old puppy or kitten read English words
so a single long chapter without anything important
lots of info dumping
troy
frog
y a useless feig
pls stop with the emojis
Marines not navies lots Chinese translations have this specific problem
blushing seeing a 12 yr old is cringe
supposedly no-one except old Nan I think talks about old tales. maesters don't acknowledge anything about white walkers .
dropping
so is he a child or a mature man, i really like an answer to this(mind).
is the MC stupid
pissed off to be exact
really bad editing
need better editing / grammar
he has been promising a lot of things to jedi, it feels like the jedi is his blind spot or even his kryptonite