Comments of chapter undefined of HxH: The Strongest Hunter Dropped (Up to Adopt)

this feels really forced it’ not like he betrayed them like batman with the justice leauge he was just asking if they kill the clan it was a simple misunderstanding and it’s really bs and forced in my opinion especially the mc not investigating the rumor before going to the troupe

You can just vote out a founding member for questioning your actions? I don’t think that is about trust. It’s communication to clear up a rumor. “Hey I heard you guys killed a whole clan for their eyes.” “No. Wasnt us.” “Ok, maybe someone is framing us. let’s find out what happened.”

so forced I mean they didn't even ask why he did such a thing... and he trusted the plot blindly... like he didn't live with them for so many years

thanks for the chapter 😊 . but the reason for leaving is as bad as it can get...... as we know it was the phantom troupe to get the eyes of kuruta clan...

This sucks a*s, I speak from my experiences only, but when ttrust s broken, even by small things it never returns. So why bother with having him be in the troupe at all if you discard it all. Just for machi? Really? The same girl we can't really find interesting since you basically made her a generic anime high school girl characterwise, with some super powers. That the relationship feels artifical because of the time skip non withstandinh.

Story was great, but this chapter ruined it so I’m dropping. Thanks for everything up until now and good luck.

Didn't expect that. I feel it was a little overkill on the reaction to sorens question, but I suppose in a way it was a way for him to break off from the group peacefully. Kinda feel that Machi tagging along going forward is the wrong way to proceed imo, and with her being pregnant I just feel it's even more out of place if she tags along with Soren.

In HxH foreseeing the future is actually a thing. So he can tell them about the whole messy situation that is to come without being burned as a reincarnator, if the spider trully is his family why doesn't he? The plot could use some extra thinking. Like something else other than training fighting and making babies. Just saying.

Sorry to say I may return in the future to read this.

I don’t know much about Omokage but he seems like the perfect culprit behind the Kurta Clan massacre. His hobby is literally listed as collecting eyes on wiki. With the current situation I feel like Kurapika could totally become an adoptive member of the Troupe. Kurapika could be a great source of information about the attackers and act as a guide for the Troupe. His potential is definitely high and he could be a good apprentice for Soren.

Much better, well done. However the next member is supposed to be the zoldyk family's father, who infiltrate to kill the brigade, even after that, as a result of an other empty spot from zoldyk's kill, there will be a new member beside hisoka. There is a wiki on the brigade, i sugest u read it for material. It's quite quick to read but exhaustive.

That's so dumb

what was the point of having him with the phantom troupe if he was just going to leave he didn't really even need to be with them if for not acquiring his wife but you could have just had him get to her before chrollo if anything

I'm seeing that most don't like the outcome, I originally did this to make Soren move on to things like the Hunter exam and searching for the fake troupe. but you all think that not having trust isn't something to kick someone out over, but it was a build up of things, like Soren's attitude when asking his question as well as acting as if it was them to begin with without having tried to do some research. he even says that nobody would have the guts to clam to be the Troupe when the massacre happened. but he was wrong. if you guys want a rewrite, I can change it but I would have to change the whole plan I came up with

This good for progress

this is so much better

Thanks for the chapter

Glad you listened to the readers criticism I appreciate the changes.

def a huge change to the ch

Ty