Daijena
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To be fair, thos are show muscles, in a actual fight they are horrible to have.
Mortals and repenting, ha Good joke
She immediatly went for the throat, yikes
Peasant mortality rate during winter could reach as high as 30% In case of a disease also going around....being sick during winter with just a cold was basically a death sentence.
Well, there was the maid that mentioned the wine cellar bed.
the words of school and real friends, meanwhile 80% of friendships from school end when school and the same enforced location requirement ends
No witnesses
It's a spam bot account, just report it and ignore it
Only part of it, so mephisto will lose a abysmal small part of himself
A idiotic bot that doesn't even make sense
Goodb ol Mass Effect
....why do you ask
....he didn't even do anything yet to deserve that.
*Looks at Medusa and Arachne*. Yes very 'gentle'
I am....very conflicted. Let's start it up with a positive, it's a good story, but for the negative...it's not a naruto fanfic, not really, will elaborate later. The gimick of Sakura is also...not real/kinda pointless? And worst of all, the real mc is....a bit of a Merry Sue, he does a lot of impossible stuff with a lot of hard effort yes...but he doesn't really fail?This entire story feels like a disconnect with what lured me into it. Without spoiling I'd advice to stop reading here. The reincarnation with a war veteran sakura because he saved a goddess without knowing and then punished for it, and then another goddess said she will fix it, but doesn't. So the story just takes care of it a different way which basically just results in them being....weird siblings/strangers?Then the author pulls some big questions for the entire world building of naruto, that sure are interesting but....resolves them in such a way that it doesn't feel the same anymore. One could argue that it's expanding the source material into their own thing. But....it also doesn't feel like that to me. It's...to thoughtful and planned out without substance? Not in action but....a dream, things happen but it doesn't feel right. None of it feels like it's possible for a down to earth person, only by a being that is attempting to act like one.Maybe it's bias, because I don't like the way many things are done while still liking the storyBut I advice for fans of Naruto to avoid this as it's more for people that want a more elaborate story. Oh yeah, and genderbender fans are wrong here as well.
...that would be dissapointing on so many levels, also, I doubt he can make anything that could outperform ninjas. He isn't sci-fi jesus with a how to guide for every invention of humanity, also, what does a gun or a tank do for you against stuff like Susano? I dislike people being obsessed with technology in fantastical worlds. It clashes with the world building, would take a unreasonable amount of effort to come even close, and honestly? Would feel very much like a plot thingy that is far to unrealistic.