Comments of chapter undefined of MMORPG: Crowd Control

.........really, i don't care how popular the game is what kind of cockamamie hospital is asking questions to a medical intern about a game, do they want people to die and really that's how you get mc into the game. And his families situation is so over done it hurts to read......my head hurts

I was shocked ldczhen wrote such a nonsensical utterly disappointing chapter. So far 2/5 stars.

This is so stupid, in what sane word does it make sense for a doctor exam to suddenly focus on game mechanics unless the game translates to real life which hasn’t been mentioned. Also his sister was in a coma for way too long. Just waking her up after 10 years when she’ was just a little kid is going to be some horrible emotional drama that I have zero faith you as an Author will actually handle properly. It would have been better to simply have the sister be seriously I’ll a disease that’ treatable but extremely expensive. Even then stupid he wouldn’t let his friend help him out, just consider it a long and pay it back slowly. No need to keep the sister suffering longer for something as stupid as “pride”.

okay, I'm gonna read it first because many reviews said it was great even though there's this nonsense logic because I don't wanna shut my brain for original books like I'm reading translation books, when I'm reading

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i think iits clue that the game will merge into real world , give it a go guys

chapter 1, the author has failed. chapter 2, redemption?

he trying to become a doctor to cure his sister is stupid is not like he is some medical super genius would make more sense for him make money and them hire a real genius to research about his sister disease

I'm confused can someone explain what actually happened!! The story was moving good, introducing character and suddenly the world is video game world or not. What even happened?

Sigh i normally give novel more than a chapter before droping, but man this is bad. I‘ll try a couple more chapters but im pretty sure it wont get better.

Teve muitas mudanças no ritmo da história em apenas um caps ,acho que foi de mais

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