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Harry said in a quiet voice.- Tidas2dCommented
... harry again can we have some peace go back your timeline.
Salazar said by the end of Harry's explanation. - Tidas2dCommented
Dang you harry not even born and you still make a appearance.
Harry nodded before he remembered He mentioned a library. - Tidas2dCommented
Never heard of him.
He had everything in his playlist starting from Swae Lee right down to XXXTentacion, he wouldn't feel too good if he lost everything that had kept him company during Childhood. - Tidas3dCommented
....seriously this would been better not to mention. All you done is give him two women right at the start with no build up to the relationship, from the reader point of view, killling a great deal interest in the characters and story.
What only makes Sterl uncomfortable is that he didn't have mastery level skills before. In the past, after fucking Linna in bed, he could only face Rayna, who had stronger endurance and mastery in martial arts, with resentment and defeat. - Tidas3dCommented
Ok feels like bad translation.
"My cheat as a time traveler?" - Tidas3dCommented
I feel like he creating his worst nightmare.
"Heh~ I really look forward to seeing how far Dimori-chan will grow." - Tidas4dCommented
To be honest i felt nother for the chapters and skimmed them.
A/N: Most of you would probably hate this kind of development, but well—I wanted to write a chapter with stakes (more like emotional or mental consequences) other than simply death in a battle, so here we are. - Tidas6dCommented
Wouldnt work ether considering how strong they are and weak rias is.
Originally, she had wanted to recruit Lala and Ryuuga as members of her peerage, but it seemed they weren't interested. - Tidas7dReplied to GigaGiant22
He describing the size of dog, its seems wing span was used for length. wing span is used describe how long or wide somthing is somtimes.
From it emerged an Akamaru completely white as snow, at least 4 meters tall and about 6 meters in wingspan. - Tidas7dCommented
....seriously all this for fbi joke that so old its not funny anymore or make sense in the setting.
After Alex meets the spirit of the relic eater he created, he can't help but question why the spirit is a loli, at first he thinks the spirit is going to be a male or just straight-up genderless, but a girl and worse a loli, Alex was afraid to go out afraid that the FBI is waiting outside his house. - Tidas8dReplied to Amon91
You do realize that whole sentence in way the structured is offensive right? Considering your implying that i dont know the author can write what he wants, im not stupid. The reason i wrote statement was because some people that read fanfics havent seen the original. While i dont care if their yuri or not, but i wouldn’t be surprised if thier was.
Ch 1 Prologue - Tidas9dReplied to Amon91Ch 1 Prologue
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Pft 37 lol
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Kinda of sad.
It was well known that only villainous families in fantasy worlds were so united. - Tidas9dCommentedCh 2 THE SITH MASK
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Boring.
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Im going be honest i forgot it even existed and never bother to even finish it, so no.
No - Tidas10dReplied to ARandomMob
Side chapter not as bad though, sorry i hate fade black or did it the most.
The story needs a lemon with Jean, but I don't feel like it at all. My lemons are ridiculously bad and take a lot of me, so the moment I open the text document, I just can't write.