It started out great. Yet the author lost focus. The story became more about the side plots than the main character. Ultimately the fluffy distractions killed the golden bird. The easiest way to avoid this is to remember why people started reading in the first place. What was the title? What was the description? How much did you entangle the readers in side stories disguised as main plots? Ultimately this was a story that became a drag as plotlines became overly drawn out and the leveling system becoming more ridiculously unpredictable each chapter as the rules of it break and bend to fit the plot.

really dumb. so forced. one second it's kill him at all costs, the next it's play around when you could die as a result. total luck of the MC is in effect.

Maybe a mixed truth would be safer. Hidden C-Class, All Rounder Magus. Reason being it is to weird for him not to have something unique after that phenomenon.

maybe the chosen ones of each era. If only one in an era can be chosen, maybe the chosen are eternals.

as amusing as this might be, this is a classic example of losing focus on why your readers began reading the novel in the first place. spoiler: we didn't read this for cats.

what a weird village & academy. schemes everywhere

well if this dude spent his points, he'd win

totally unnecessary chapter.

patent first, test second

? he knew the inspection was happening ? not your best chapter

For a plane he sacrificed his opportunity to level up in a high level gate? I'd of said no and absolutely no.

Of course not. Preach to all to unify.

Stellar work on this novel

Emily ey

so she's come back in time? seems that way, but there must be limitations.

strange twist

his family was ruined in that very battle

you're reading different novels than me. so far this feels original enough.

offense time

prices on web novel are always high