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Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommentedauthor u should try to read reincarnation of strongest sword god so that you'l have references of advance VR game , chapter one you mention that game is advance but when the mc log in cant even detect what his gender , and the npc is more human than the players , u should fucos on names of players than npcs specialy the mc stats and you should explain more about the game system , you rush everything like you jump up to special event even tho the mc still lvl one .and what the hell his stats? every players should fair stats when new characters , how could he has high PR than other when the system cant even detect his gender lol
Klaus Park glanced back at the sound of footsteps and saw three guys in flashy armor approaching where he was, all of them had blond hair and blue eyes.- Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
gooo mutate hahahaaha
[Congratulations! You've obtained a support skill: Elemental Spirit Blade (S)] - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
its fun to read like this , he is not OP its just the skill was too OP for but his body was not
Now, even if a level 100 expert wanted to break in, it would be impossible without his permission. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
a guaranteed shield barrier hahahaa
1. Without the permission of the person who pasted the talisman, no unit can enter the house. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
if his damage low with the help or his mutated talent he perhaps could deal more damage instead ?
Since the appearance of God's Path 20 years ago, the number of players has risen to more than 200 million worldwide. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
OP talent my goodness
[Talent: Luck] - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
I'm dropping this
Rezen wants to reach the top but he also has some distinguishable characteristics. Two of which were laziness and impatience - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
godlike ahahha
In this world, talents are divided into 7 levels. From the bottom to the top, they are; Ungraded, Graded, Inferior, Uncommon, Superior, Heroic, and Legendary - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
i think the author has the deep grudge to country of US , u made mistaked author if u right fantasy novel , always keep remember to never used your own emotion if have a problem with that country , since it was obvious bias.
At the same time it was one of the main reasons why this country was hit with the brutalest attacks ever! - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
you can warp your slimy body to your women and stretch your sword down there hahaha
[Compatible symbiotic body object -- Slime!] - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
the clueless mc is the choosen one to save the world hahahahahaha
"Just shut up and listen to me, Lei Zhen. In Magnolia, there is no such class as a Crowd Controller." - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
i think is the mc is the choosen one and the class crowd controler is exclusive to him hahahaaa
[Class: Crowd Controller] - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
crowd controll should be part or rather job or hidden job for mage why making new class out of common we know . if that class is Op then everyone will choose crowd control because its still deal damage and control its opponent.
"There are a total of 7 game classes such as Knight, Mage, Archer, Enchanter, Assassin, Paladin, and Crowd Controller." She said without thinking. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
an A.I with a thoughts of normal human
'Interesting… he couldn't be a gay, right?' She thought. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommentedCh 1 Dream Shattered
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ohhh man , this is system game but not showing status of the mc and stats , now the author mention dual cultivate
"I'm a magician who can dual cultivate!" Lu Benwei said proudly. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
i think im gonna drop this
Skill proficiency was divided into five levels. From low to high, they were E, D, C, B, A, and S. - Daoist0Pkl4Y11mthCommented
author show mc status this is game like system genre u should include them.
The school quickly arranged for people to bring the seriously injured and dead students who died in the mystic realm assessment down.