Comments of chapter undefined of Void Evolution System
Void Evolution System
Crocs_is_Dead
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Crocs_is_Dead
all right I was kind of okay with the novel before this but it's really just a plagiarized arifuerta. for those of you that don't know there's a novel and an anime and a manga called artifuerta and this author takes almost the end tired beginning portion of that novel as his. he doesn't even really try to change it that much with the main character losing the arm just like Hajime did. that's the main character of artifuerta. he also has his hair changed to Silver just like hajime. the first creature he tries to kill is a rabbit and surprise surprise he can't at all and ends up almost getting killed by it just like Hajime. he kills a wolf and then ends up eating it out of desperation just like Hajime. for no reason he gets a sudden spark of humanity even though he would undoubtedly become more powerful and it would be more worthwhile to kill a random Beast that he found that for somehow some reason ends up having a look in his eyes that means he wants to survive just like our main character did, which is stupid because most likely every animal he's killed so far has had the exact same flame but whatever. he ends up teleporting to a random place where everything is Spilled Out for the main character involving anything that could potentially happen in the past. just like Hajime. and by that I mean he gets teleported to a random portion of the dungeon where there's a book on the table and it reads out the past events that are extremely important that were left in a book and also that the dungeon he's in is one of the very most ancient ones that have God like creatures who either built them or are living in them. which is the exact same thing that happened in artifuerta. and all the first 20 chapters of this book are a complete rip off of another novel. and I wouldn't even be upset about that if the story was written well. but not only does it almost follow the exact same pacing as the other novel our author somehow manages to make dialogue that is 10 times worse than the other novel and almost teenitally more cringe
FIRST HOW IS THE WOLF HUMAN SIZE WHEN ITS IN HIS ARMS AND IT WAS EASY FOR HIM TO PICK UP??? AND ON TOP OF THAT WHEN HE GOT IN YHE ROOM HE PLACED IT ON THE GROUND Y NOT JUST DROP IT?? HE SHOULD WAKE THE STUPID THING UP AND TELL IT IT CANT SLEEP AND RELY ON HIM AND WHAT IF HE WASNT THERE WOULD IT SLEEP THEN?? NO IT WOULDNT SO HE NEEDS TO MAKE IT UNDERSTAND!!!
