Alen_Tanor
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you put exclamation marks at the wrong sentences. other then that, good start
so much for thta
Alen_Tanor:Thanks. I'm about to start a full fix of the chapters,
it's cool that it wasn't some god or some foreign entity that gave him a system out of pity but it created it himself cool so far
Will this novel have explicit scenes?
Pretty much later on, if the sceans are explicit, ***, or just a bit spicy. That will depends on the community preference. What do you want to see?
restart chapter sounds like a video game đđđ
worth a read if I do say so myself keep it up I will be watching
TDG all over again
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Good start!
noice...
great start thanks for the chapter
Thanks for the chap
Thank You For The Chapter â¤ď¸â¤ď¸
thanks for the chapter! đđ
you should remove the exclamation marks...its somewhat irritating to read, it should only be used if the speaker is excited or yelling. Except that looking good so far.
So many exclamation marks!
This is soo interesting :D
made on his own. he should be smiling that his number one companion still here.