Comments of chapter undefined of Hell Hath No Fury At All

Thanks for the chap

It's already an interesting starting point. Just do the proofread of your creation, and be mindful of proper punctuation marks which are important which we writers ignore mostly. :)

That’ was so cools

Not bad

Wow, so far so good. Very good start for the first chapter. I like the confusion when he was birthed and the description of his mother was very detailed, I love it.

Great start, as with this type of genre you get into it knowing how the premise will be in the first chapters. Making it a fast read. I hope the up coming chapters are as greatly written and something new to this genre.

This was a pretty good intro chapter! It does an amazing job of explaining the backstory and the rebirth of Zionai! There are a few typos and the chapter does move very quickly but overall great chapter!

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Overall, it's an interesting first chapter. A few non-glaring grammar issues, but nothing that breaks immersion. Looking forward to reading more and learning about the name, Zionai—if it's an original then kudos.