I think I am in love with the protagonist. Everything about this novel is flawless except for grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. I hope you will improve it in the future. Good job 😀

I like long chapters although they are a pain to write for the authors. Thanks, you increased my vocabulary. Enjoying it so far

Found many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors but they do not disturb my experience.

Thank you for your kind words ☺ I will work harder to make it even better keep supporting

the narration is done from the protagonist POV

I loved the story. But due to my phone battery that is 16%, I can not continue at the moment but the plot is interesting 😀 I would greatly accept your suggestions to improve my novel. Keep it up buddy.☺

Description About how the power works are very complex. But accept that this novel has a good first impression.😀

I will keep that in mind in

yes

The system can not control his whole body at once

Ok roger that

thank you for your suggestion

As you asked I am reading it and god Jesus it is 98 per cent perfect with 2 percent flaws

Hey bud what happened? it has been 16 days now. Are you okay?

Thanks for reviewing

Hello author here . Thanks for all the love and support. But first let me introduce myself properly. My name will remain a secret. But I am from a country which is one of the poorest countries in the world. This is my first time writing a novel. Thus I am still inexperienced and a rookie. Also I do not live in any European countries or American countries thus I am not so good at English. So there might be grammatical errors and wrong words .So please do suggest the mistakes I will try my best to solve it