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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

The_Great_Lazy_One
The_Great_Lazy_OneLv13The_Great_Lazy_One

Author probably dropped this story due to negative feedback on most recent chapters. Story was overall good until he started to shift the focus of the story to the son. Helios is kind of boring overall and we want the main plot to advance more instead of what feels like filler chapters with no substance. In my opinion he should not have done that, if anything he should continue the main story and make a different story be for Helios.

_Asura_2414
_Asura_2414Lv4_Asura_2414

I hope this didn’t get dropped it was good

BLACK_GLOOM
BLACK_GLOOMLv4BLACK_GLOOM

Gwen after knowing Helios went to the warehouse

Porya_Nasiri
Porya_NasiriLv4Porya_Nasiri

i didn't come here for teenage drama😑 what happened to the main story?

Avengtank
AvengtankLv5Avengtank

I dnt know why we r leaving the MC and focusing on helios. At this point helios is the new mc , so might as well make a new fanfic with that settings. Chapters r getting so boring and the more chapters we go the more we stray away from MC. The fic was going so good but you have to make mc and athena have a child ... Its still ok at this point but now u focus more on his chils than the mc. Just tell me in the pass 10 or 20 chapter how many times we read about the actual MC and how many times about Helios. I know this is slice of life which attracted me to this fanfic but suddenly changing MC in middle of the fic is kinda bad. There are lots of plots in marvel universe but the story seems to not progress much from the time MC and Thena got married. It seems like a lots of chapters but most of them are fillers.

Mc_Fly
Mc_FlyLv13Mc_Fly

I didn't see Boruto, and I am sure I won't read about Helios. It was nice to read this,

VidDav_FerDeL
VidDav_FerDeLLv4VidDav_FerDeL

thx for the chap

BTOOOM_18
BTOOOM_18Lv4BTOOOM_18

Thanks for the chapter. I don't really care much about Helios, just because of Gwen he attracts some of my attention. If possible, I would like to see more interaction between the Mc and his apostles.

unIReap
unIReapLv14unIReap

boring chaper

DaoOfSurprise
DaoOfSurpriseLv4DaoOfSurprise

im still here waiting hoping dreaming of you coming back to continue

Kratos_Dragon
Kratos_DragonLv15Kratos_Dragon

Please come back please

Romain_C
Romain_CLv4Romain_C

Go to Scribble Hub. The next chapter is there. Author has a problem with his password

logan_deabreu
logan_deabreuLv3logan_deabreu

Hey any chapters anytime soon?

Growl_16
Growl_16Lv4Growl_16

update please

Gamer_Gamin
Gamer_GaminLv4Gamer_Gamin

HELLO CAN YOU PLEASE CONTINUE THE STRANGER THINGS I LOVE THAT SO I CAN SEE MORE MAGNETO POWERS ANS STUFF BLAH BLAH BLAH BALH NLAHBLAB BLAH BLAH BPAH BLAH BLH BALH ABLHABLA JABB HABA LANBA ABKALAN AHANA AKMANABAHNABAHBALN AHNABAOAMBAHA ABBABAHNAILABA BBLAB AJ ABAJAL ABAH A AL BABA OAMVANJAHAB A A A BLB ANLAH BALH BALH BLAHN ALAN ABANANAMBA ALABA AA ANA A NANABANALHABAKAOQ9BRBFOWIQJDOWJDODJA9KD SKSBE FNSBEJRNDNWBJD VVF D F F F F F G G G GG G G G G V V FS E Y IRRW Q 3U I N AAE J M C S 3 IRS V D ZB N RSG

Obit_ren
Obit_renLv4Obit_ren

Continue please

TheFirstFounder
TheFirstFounderLv14TheFirstFounder

Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4Alfiemooon

please keep writing dude

Growl_16
Growl_16Lv4Growl_16

update?

Curious_Wizard
Curious_WizardLv3Curious_Wizard

Thank you Author for this great read. and yeah i hope you didn't drop it. even the upload may delay but it's good as long as it is not dropped.

logan_deabreu
logan_deabreuLv3logan_deabreu

Still hoping for more!😊