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It just keeps getting worse and worse with each chapter. The main character lacks any "character". And its presence only subtracts from the logic of the plot. We get numerous opinions about the ML, but his actions aren't reassuring. A lacking protagonist, with a significantly bland story combined with a writing style that doesn't fit. Nevertheless, I invite anyone who reads my comment to try it. After all, it may be a simple matter of taste.
Then stop reading, if you dislike it so much just stop reading.
do you know the chords of every song you hear?
still not gonna write themselves
I think Complete - Jordan would be a good song with the background
The story is good, English isn't my first language, so I can't review the grammar. Therefore, I will talk about the plot. Spoilers ahead. It's been 15 chapters, yet the main lead is still a baby and had less than 1 hour of "screen time" As a personal preference, I would have enjoyed it more if we were shown each personality and its perks from the pov of the parents as the prologue. Instead, we got a subject that could cause a crisis for the personalities even before we could create an emotional connection with them. I believe it would have been better to fit small insights into it through the years and let the readers slowly realize what is happening. Nevertheless, it is a good story, and people should try it. I find myself excited to see how it develops.