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Mc_Fly

Mc_Fly

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2020-04-04 JoinedPeru
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly1d
    Commented
    'No... not again...'
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    House of the Dragon: Stars of the Realm.
    TV · Evilmoon
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly5mth
    Commented
    When they saw me bow my body, everyone fell silent, but I knew that wasn't enough, so I continued, "If you are still upset, you can report it to the Underground Student Council, and I will come along to be your witness."
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    Prison School +Plus
    Anime & Comics · InstaMoist
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly5mth
    Commented
    Looking at these men sitting at the same table as me made me sigh in frustration because they were a bunch of losers from every angle I saw, and what disgusted me the most was their pervertedness that knew no bounds.
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    Prison School +Plus
    Anime & Comics · InstaMoist
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly5mth
    Replied to AcOu0KinG
    She was a beautiful middle-aged woman that seemed to be in her late twenties. Her breasts were way too big. Not to mention she had a loose button, it was as if they would burst out.
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    [Multiverse] Sex System In Classroom of The Elite
    Anime & Comics · AlmightySkyDxddy
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly7mth
    Replied to Betoran2

    some people have weird kinks

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    Buggy D Clown
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly8mth
    Posted

    It just keeps getting worse and worse with each chapter. The main character lacks any "character". And its presence only subtracts from the logic of the plot. We get numerous opinions about the ML, but his actions aren't reassuring. A lacking protagonist, with a significantly bland story combined with a writing style that doesn't fit. Nevertheless, I invite anyone who reads my comment to try it. After all, it may be a simple matter of taste.

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    The Healer Prince : HOTD SI
    Book&Literature · Drkest
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly9mth
    Replied to Kurdi123

    Then stop reading, if you dislike it so much just stop reading.

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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
    Anime & Comics · Othniel_Seth
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly9mth
    Commented
    "Just a Nightstalker."
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    Destiny: The Legendary Hunter
    Video Games · Writers_Ablood
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly9mth
    Commented
    "We heard you loud~ and~ clear~, mum~." They chimed in unison, "We'll respect him just like we respect Percy!"
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    I'm just a Defense Against the Dark Arts Professor, nothing more.
    Book&Literature · _Riux
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Commented
    Ch -1 The Great Rewrite
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    TVD/TO: The Original Wolf
    TV · The_Crimson_Writer
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Replied to Shota_Prince
    'Must be nice to be that strong.' Void sighed internally observing his carefree demeanor.
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    Destiny: The Legendary Hunter
    Video Games · Writers_Ablood
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Replied to Noble_K1ng

    do you know the chords of every song you hear?

    Then I found the finger style pattern that matched, in that second everything came together to create such a haunting melody that sent chills down my spine. It captured the lyrics of the song like it was made for it. I got lost in the melody while perfecting it, the transition between the pre chorus to the chorus was where the goose bumps needed to hit, and my god did it.
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    Modern Family: A Star
    TV · AceOfHearts18
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

    still not gonna write themselves

    "I woke up an hour ago old man, these songs ain't gonna write themselves" He turned to me with a cheeky smile, it's good to see him smile again.
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    Modern Family: A Star
    TV · AceOfHearts18
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Replied to aurelien
    She is very cute. I wonder how cute she would be with cat ears and a tail.
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    Great...I'm A Devil Swordman (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Taidanotsumi
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Commented

    I think Complete - Jordan would be a good song with the background

    I don't need to change myself, just be the best version of me.
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    Modern Family: A Star
    TV · AceOfHearts18
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly10mth
    Commented
    "Oh for fuck sake..."
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    Modern Family: A Star
    TV · AceOfHearts18
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly11mth
    Posted

    The story is good, English isn't my first language, so I can't review the grammar. Therefore, I will talk about the plot. Spoilers ahead. It's been 15 chapters, yet the main lead is still a baby and had less than 1 hour of "screen time" As a personal preference, I would have enjoyed it more if we were shown each personality and its perks from the pov of the parents as the prologue. Instead, we got a subject that could cause a crisis for the personalities even before we could create an emotional connection with them. I believe it would have been better to fit small insights into it through the years and let the readers slowly realize what is happening. Nevertheless, it is a good story, and people should try it. I find myself excited to see how it develops.

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    Ruling Hollywood
    Celebrities · ColinIvory
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly11mth
    Commented
    Ai's eye twitched, and she kept a conscious effort to make sure her eyes didn't stray downwards. She knew Jason was a fit person, but she didn't expect him to have the physique of a Greek statue.
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    The Omniversal Slaughter (Anime/Multi Crossover)
    Anime & Comics · Capybarian
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly11mth
    Posted

    a hidden gem, great job Author

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    The Omniversal Slaughter (Anime/Multi Crossover)
    Anime & Comics · Capybarian
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  • Mc_Fly
    Mc_Fly11mth
    Commented
    "Wheatley, don't make him hold back. Make him go for the kill and remove his gadgets."
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    The Omniversal Slaughter (Anime/Multi Crossover)
    Anime & Comics · Capybarian
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