Its not about pace bro , you realise that people get attracted to your novel and click on it due to the title which mentions group chat as well as the anime pic on it right??? And for the 11 chapters there is nothing related to it. You get my point? Its like you are going to a Pizza shop and sitting there and the waiter keeps bringing you every menu except the Pizza and when you are almost full they give u the pizza menu.
i dnt get how this novel got such high reviews with such inconsistency in the story. Also the story is dragged out waaaay too much. I read uptill entrance examination chapter which is at 170 + chapters. If a reader have to wait for 170 chapter to reach the climax of the story then the story becomes very uninteresting. Most of the chapters feels like fillers , if u just read the title or skip few of the chapters it will not effect much on the storyline. Also the redemption the readers want to see , or the revenge the readers what to see against the Duchess or the heroines are no where in site. Even at chapter 175 i find no revenge against anything. This story feels like extremely slow power up simulator. Also the romance is kind of meh.. For me all this points make this extremely boring. So i dropped it at 175..
The author just axed himself with all the controversial stuff of ntr or else if he just write normal and interesting stuff i think this fic would be a bomb. i also dropped on the part of MC NTRing himself(according to me it is).
i dnt know why the author thinks we need so much drama, if we didn't come for the fanfic and the chat group then we might as well read other novels instead of reading this overly dragged piece of crape fic. Even though i got warned in the synopsis that the chat group start at 11 th chapter i still tried to read it hoping for atleast something interesting.
i mean there is never a person in reality who became way too powerful and did not have a harem. its in our genes we like to conquer womens and territories. Only poor people and people who dnt have the power(influence, status etc), dreams of having one girl. They have a hard time getting even one girl.
Very underwhelming , feeling like i am reading chinese translation. Gacha is interesting but the author could do execute it nicely to keep the engagement of the readers. Also no harem in a fanfic also kinda very uninteresting to me.
the whole novel gives NTR vibes tbh with the sister and her lover and stuff and also as u said with the clones and putting souls in them.
it gets very wierd at later chapters with clone and stuff. Basically clone NTR as clones have their individual soles and stuff. Also MC is very unlikeable , simp and staying within his sister's garsps. The whole novel give NTR vibes sorry :(
Very interesting concept and it was OKish to read up till chapter 20ish but the more i go the more the chapters become fillers. The MC can evolve so many things but doesn't. I dnt know what he is waiting for. He can continuously evolve living things and non living things but dnt know why he doesn't. The first part of the novel was going somewhat good with the prospect of kingdom building but around 60 ish chapters it become adventure type novel. Sometimes while reading this it feels like author have dementia and is continuously forgetting that the MC have Evolve skill. This skill should be used in all the chapters but its rarely shown. Also the romance is kind of forces in my opinion. The pacing of the story is way to fast and most of the chapters are filled with fillers. For example when MC evolves any living thing it will come with a chapter or 2 with it. Even if u skip those chapters u will not feel like you missed anything. Just try it and tell me.
bro what is this????? Did the author change??? from a mature person to a 12 year kid? I dnt know but i am sure something must happened in the past 2 chapters. The novel is becoming crack fest. Author fell into depression or something?? this big of a change is unnatural. Suddenly the novel converted from a good really interesting story to just gibberish .
The author is definitely deleting all reviews lower than 5 star. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . This is why i am writing this review. I didnot read too many chapter but i will edit my review when i read more.
Blue ones are best !! <3
There is nothing interesting going on in this fanfic let me tell you in details, maybe author might get some help from this. 1. MC powers are very uninteresting. There is nothing interesting going on. 2. Lack of climax in the segment of the story. The MC achieves nothing particular interesting or different from the actual story line. Nothing to look forward to except the system. 3. Failing expectations of the readers. Its not like i am tell you to listen to the readers, no no thats not what it is , i want to say that we are getting excited on what the rewards will be from the gachas but the rewards pours cold water on us. 4. The story progress seems vague ......... 5. There were few sparks of romance but the author killed it. 6. Otherworld introduction haphazardly and choosing a wrong world. Fairly tail would be a nice world for the MC to grow but he chose MHA even though he got quirk. People would be excited for MHA if he didnot have a quirk and then get a quirk after going there and starting to develop it along side with the MC or the MHA arc 7. Again the choice of quirks and powers are so no interesting enough. 8. Poor utilization of powers, even after MC got kirishima's quirk he seems very fragile. Not saying you have to make MC op from start but remember its a fanfic , if we want MC to struggle just like every other novel we would not come here to read fanfic. 9. its been 90+ chaps nothing going on in those chapters, trust me if u skip few chapters in the middle u will not miss anything than fillers.
Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.
I am sure i used to read one of your other novels too and the same problem happened here too, there is very little world building , nothing interesting happened even after reading upto 17 chapters. There is nothing to keep readers retention. I know i am judging it too early but there is nothing interesting happening to keep me entertained in frist few chapters although the concept of the novel is nice but for now all these summons and stuffs feels pretty pointless when there is nothing going on in the world and the missions given by system are pretty meh. There are lots of stuffs which can make this interesting with the abilities he got but the story looks pretty meh for now. I will try to read more and if it gets improved i will edit my review but for now my review is : Concept is good , Story is monotonous and not interesting , characters are good but their dialogue doesnot matches with their original characters.
well i thought in this chapter at least I could see some action but still lackluster chapter as ever