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Avengtank

Avengtank

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2017-11-30 JoinedIndia
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank7d
    Posted

    Nice experience reading this to chapter 21. I would have given 5 star if the girls which betrayed MC were killed or not mentioned from now on but from how the story is going i dnt think its gonna happen. So.........

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    My Beautiful Master Is A Yandere
    Anime & Comics · LuknameFanfics
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank7d
    Posted

    very bad writing. Author puts chapters as author notes and also put immersion breaking narrations which kill the involvement of the reader. Also the idea of onepiece system is interesting but the execution of it is very bad and boaring. Example: the Author could take some other interesting Fruit which would make the reading much interesting. Also in a cultivation world the pace the MC is developing is very slow. Also mixing of onepiece system and cultivation makes is very uninteresting. The integrations between the characters is also not executed properly to keep the readers engaged. All the chapters feels very boring , lackluster and very short. I would like to see author improve and will edit this review later if it gets better.

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    One piece system in a cultivation world.
    Anime & Comics · Rugh13
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank1mth
    Posted

    Its verrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyy slllllooooooooow pace, It took 20 chapters for prologue and its been 30 chapters and the mc is still in baby phase. Wow. Even if the story is like diamond readers like me loose interest in it if it drags on way to much. At first there was anticipation then slowly i started loosing interest in what will happen next then i had to drop it completely. I guess it might interest few people but this fanfic is not for me.

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    Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
    Anime & Comics · Pewpewcachoo
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank1mth
    Replied to zedmoto123

    man if the rewrite is so bad i wonder how much bad the original was?? Bruh your concept is ok but u are running to fast , faster than a Lockheed SR-71 Blackbird and sometimes teleporting and skipping major keypoints which makes the story interesting. Please improve the story and remove the major randomness and give some backstory or introduce the powers and stuff. This will make the fanfic way better.

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    Reincarnated as Amane Fujimiya (A Chat Group Fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · zedmoto123
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank1mth
    Posted

    what the hek is going on with this fanfic?? The randomness is so cancerous that it started to hurt my brain. I tried putting my brain on auto mode and tried to go more than 10 chapters but i failed. Suddenly gaining powers, suddenly practicing in dojo makes u cut a building, suddenly we know that he is part of an organization, suddenly he already had emiya's power. This novel seems to be written by a child suffering from adhd.

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    Reincarnated as Amane Fujimiya (A Chat Group Fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · zedmoto123
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank1mth
    Posted

    Very bad , very bland, nothing interesting. Its like i am reading a log book. The MC is way overpower but its ok if its slice of life but no, nothing like that. MC is doing whatever he wants. Also he summons a bunch of other characters from different anime and couldnot portray the characters well enough. I read upto chapter 16 and nothing interesting is going on. Also change of POV to other summons is so bad and immersion breaking. All the time i am reading it fells like i am reading nothing. Introduction of sudden OC without proper explanations and many more things which makes this novel atrocious to read. The novel is very fast pace which is also another cons.

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    King Of All Bijuu: The Origin Of All Chakra
    Anime & Comics · PeakWorm
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Commented

    More chapters <3

    Ch 149 Starting the Production
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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to Assnkneepads

    lmao u contradict what you say in the same sentence and you tell me i am ignorant wow.

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    Boruto: Suna’s Mighty Clan
    Anime & Comics · Assnkneepads
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Posted

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    It's Okay To Take My Waifus To The Dungeon
    Anime & Comics · chastityqm
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to Assnkneepads

    exactly thats why even after so many chapters there are no reviews xD

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    Boruto: Suna’s Mighty Clan
    Anime & Comics · Assnkneepads
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to Gh0st

    i predicted that waaay before. If a fanfic is made on a unlikeable ripoff, then one can guess how bad the fanfiction be like.

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    Boruto: Suna’s Mighty Clan
    Anime & Comics · Assnkneepads
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to RyseUp

    Please read what i said in the previous comment then start commenting without getting your ego hurt.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to RyseUp

    no one cares. I read uptill chapter 140 and i liked it very much , no romantic situation till now and It doesn't matter to me whether it is harem or not as the story is really good. So stop being insecure and start reading.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Posted

    I read uptill chapter 140 and it was an awesome read. Very engaging, less annoying mysteries, great strategies and great kingdom building. I am very much looking forward to the technologies MC bring in his world. Lots of great possibilities with the story. Until this point i find to romantic interaction with anyone but looking forward to the future. Author cannot wait for more chapters.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to QuantumVoid

    this must be authors main account

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    The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
    Magical Realism · QuantumVoid
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to QuantumVoid

    wow nice job replying on your own comment from different account

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    The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
    Magical Realism · QuantumVoid
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Commented
    As soon as the thought came to my mind, an intense sexual urge took over my body and mind. At the same time, the door opened, and a girl entered the room. Humm! That paint makeup on her face, twin pigtails, tight red glittery underwear, and a tank top that was hardly covering her ample breast. Wait a minute!
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    MY HAREM IN DC & MARVEL MULTIVERSE
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to Sanjay_Padavi

    what are these bot comments?? are u guys friend with this creepy f-k or something??

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    Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
    Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to SOhey

    paid review confirmed! and a very weird justification

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    Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
    Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
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  • Avengtank
    Avengtank2mth
    Replied to Ritesh_Jha_1696

    paid review confirmed!

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    Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
    Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
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