Comments of chapter undefined of Dragonlord (HP × ASOIAF)

thnx ...well made..but please focus more on the hero...and the development changes ...crazy white man fighting becomes boring

I have read some comments. And I will tell you that this is your story, others have nothing to say about it. As I always say, you can comment, criticize and even give advice to a writer. But you can't force a writer to write the way they want. I have been reading this story for a long time and I can tell you that it is one of the improvements. Not only do you focus on Harry, but on the repercussions of his actions worldwide, you also perfectly adapt the rest of the characters, instead of forcing them to always focus on Harry, but they have their own stories. A true writer is dedicated to making a reader fall in love with his story but not only for the main character but for the development of the story etc... You also get part of the Lore from the world of ASOIAF which has its difficulties, I didn't come here for Harry, at least at first. If not to read a good story. ASOIAF is more of a chronological story of a series of characters in a certain way, it's not just Harry, but each character has an important moment for him.

Thanks for the update 🌼

Thank you for the great chapter! Have my power stone!

One of those chapters I won't remember the content of because it's not that important.

[img=update][img=recommend] Thank you for the chapter [img=recommend][img=update].

Madly in love with this story, I am not against interludes and narrations of other characters, but only if they are colorful people (Stanis, Robert, Tywin, John Aren, etc.) Pov A petty lord who was not even mentioned in the original book - causes boredom and I quickly flipped through the floor of the chapter

Thanks for the chapter :P

Thanks for chapter

great chapter eagerly waiting for the next chapter