thnx ...well made..but please focus more on the hero...and the development changes ...crazy white man fighting becomes boring

well done.

there is no meat to the story ..just postering and vage threats and power plays nothing with substance ...correct me if im wrong.👍🏾

thnx 4 the chapter 👍🏾

its good ...The skyrim mix works well...don't worry about the gramercy

well done.

great chapter. keep it up👍🏾

great chapter [img=update]

its about pop of baby ...get it done take your i care not if it is months ...give me more 👌

ok story..your just saying the same thing that other writers of fan fics say switch it up a bit... focus on the mc more to much focus on secondary characters..thnx [img=recommend]

thnx for the chapter it was well written.[img=recommend]

thanks for the chapter.

great fic ..better than most only the skyrim one stands with it

no question SG man[img=update]

bam bam