Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)

Good chapter but your laying the simp level a little too thick Davey shouldn't outclass him so much with all the training he has done

I get he is smitten with her, but this is a little over the top don't you think. All that training and experience he has accumulated amounted to nothing??

Author, this chapter spat on every training he did before that, before he got to the island he managed to beat Oberyn in a sparring, or are you suggesting that Dacey is stronger than Oberyn, right he was nervous about being in love at first sight. , but being spanked this badly, being thrown in the mud, getting bruised, stuffy nose, split lips, letting yourself be yelled at and disrespected like that because of a crush at first sight, if the person who beat you was a person stronger or at least more experienced than he would be saying nothing, bu Dacey, and it's not because of her being a girl that I'm saying this.

does he think he can impress dacey by being a simp in sparring between them? stop your mc from being a simp, it will only ruin the story.

Ok, first and foremost I want to say that till chapter 49 you did an amazing job, but the current chapter(chapter 50)... it leaves a bad taste in my mouth. So all the training he did, all the suffering and meditation went out of the window when he faced a 11 years old girl.... not to sound sexist or anything but wasn't the OC someone that won against Oberyn Martell? Now he is losing because of what? hormones?

Why the MC is letting Dacey crush it's so unlike is attitude my advice.

I have to say with this chapter having Dacey easily crush him multiple times for no real good reason kind of just destroyed this chapter for me I liked all the other parts of it and I have no issue with him getting his a** handed to him but unfortunately this made no sense he's beating fully grown men but can't beat Dacey I could understand if she was some kind of super Warrior woman and him having a hard time against her but as far as I know she has no special powers no special training and no real good competition to keep up good training versus Duncan who has superpowers some weird breathing technique a near god-level trainer and multiple training partners who could give him a run for his money As far as I see it he should be able to be run over by a horse barely breathing and still give her a good fight Don't get me wrong the women of Bear Island have been tough-as-nails and good Fighters throughout all the fanfics I've ever read but this is a girl who is not fully grown who is conceited and thanks everyone that is not a bear Islander is a wimp should not match up against him in any way shape or form that I can understand

no guy should ever go through with this it's too toxic.... no stones for you today 🙂. don't make him a simp

This chapter was painful to read, I hope he changes or this story will be ruined.

Abusive relationships are sad things, physical or mental aggressions are constantly made, many authors put this in their works thinking it's funny, but the reality is that it's sad, because they make many people think that this is normal, and honestly I predict it will be one of those relationships that the mc is going to have with his future partner apparently, I can only regret about it and advise people who don't mirror this to think about what is right in a love relationship.

all them training he had done just isntantly amounted to nothing, zero, none, nada. author couldve just made the mc lose to her on purpose instead of nerfing him over some bs reason.

Wow, what a simp. Did the author suddenly forgot that Duncan is a grown man in a child's body?? Did he just stutter for a little kid?? Does he even know that he can just dodge? Cause this is just pathetic... If the novel continues to be like this, then there's no point on going any further Whipped af

I think this is the first time the author has disappointed me heavily. This is a good story, cohesive and coherent, but this chapter was a disappointment in so many ways. First there was the lack of control, it is normal for a boy, young man or man, to lose his composure when he talks to a woman he likes; second, why was he beaten? Losing decorum momentarily is understandable, but reflexes trained over years are ingrained in his subconscious, he would naturally deviate; third, to put the two of them as "equals" in a future relationship, or to make the MC try hard to win the girl the author makes him beat up by her even though something wouldn't happen for a thousand reasons, and the author just does it anyway . ps: one of the reasons is that house Mormont's own servants would stop it.

You know i did like the plot untill now but the part with dacey was a bit too much for me. Im dropping this😓

......I’m not a fan of this chapter

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Dacey is described as a lanky woman nearly two yards and a foot tall.[2] Looking comfortable dressed in breastplate and chain mail.[3]Despite her complexion, Dacey looked elegant wearing dresses and dancing.[4]. dacey is not among the most beautiful women in the north.

Ty, amazing chapter 👍