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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh9d
    Commented

    Mercenary?

    Chapter 4 Mercenary
    Marvel: I Have Homelanders Powers
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh13d
    Replied to NomadicWaffle

    I thought it might be but there is something different about her here but I can’t quite put my finger on it

    "Well, Death, my dear," I replied, "that's because if I reveal myself in front of Sona now, I won't be able to make a grand entrance in front of Rias later. And you know how much I love making a dramatic entrance for her."
    Overlord: The Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Black_Bolt_
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh15d
    Replied to Abdul_Rahman_5112

    In the show yes but I don’t know about the comics

    "Hughie, says Homelander can't see through Zinc. So we grabbed a bunch of Zinc rolls," Butcher says as Hughie grabs a bunch of rolls with Butcher while I drag the cage into a smaller room used for interrogation. 
    Wolverine in The Boys
    TV · Anomander_Adaar
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh19d
    Commented

    I’m enjoying both your books so far hope you keep writing Mr Author Also I hope you do a dc book next

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 Victory
    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh19d
    Replied to Kais_Imperium

    I mean he got that name from his town and he is living in that town in this book…. Wouldnt that be problematic

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 Victory
    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh19d
    Replied to First_Endless

    Also shouldn’t he be worried about the impact zone cus theoretically a 20-30 foot by 1 foot tungsten rod from high orbit has the impact of a nuclear bomb what would this giant snake do….maybe delete a town or cause a tsunami if it hit the ocean

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    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh20d
    Replied to 7DeadViolets

    You could even use nohobino sometimes but if you use it too much or keep switching names your story will get confusing

    ".........." Shin only tilted his head in response. 
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh20d
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    That’s why you use pronouns like he/him/his for male, she/her/hers for female and they/them/their for gender neutral.

    ".........." Shin only tilted his head in response. 
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh20d
    Replied to 7DeadViolets

    Right but you keep changing how you refer to him it goes from the nohobino to tsukuyomi to shin and you keep interchanging them multiple times every chapter

    ".........." Shin only tilted his head in response. 
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh20d
    Commented

    I wish you would stick to one name……

    Ch 5 Quick Finish
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh21d
    Commented

    Why do you keep changing his name?

    ".........." Shin only tilted his head in response. 
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh21d
    Commented

    ……..changed his name?

    "...Shin."
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh21d
    Replied to 7DeadViolets

    …. Those are not black eyes They look either blue or grey

    Tsukuyomi relinquished his hold on the Nahobino form. His body shined with a white light before revealing a human man with brown hair and black eyes. Without the strength that originated from his form, an all consuming exhaustion wracked his body. Immediately, he fell unconscious in the sand. 
    Nahobino In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · 7DeadViolets
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh21d
    Commented

    …..why not just throw it into space at that point?

    Opening his eyes they glowed red as he came crashing down to the snake. Taking it in his arms again he went faster and faster, appearing like a meteor. The friction of the air quickly ignited and burned all around them but this was nothing for Brandon however the same couldn't be said for the King Serpent who wailed in agony.
    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh21d
    Replied to V_Paradox
    "Well, Death, my dear," I replied, "that's because if I reveal myself in front of Sona now, I won't be able to make a grand entrance in front of Rias later. And you know how much I love making a dramatic entrance for her."
    Overlord: The Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Black_Bolt_
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh22d
    Commented

    Good so far just needs more chapters

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 Local Danger Part 1
    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh24d
    Commented

    His name is Eren Ren?…………

    Something about Eren Ren wasn't explained in the novel, which made his character appear out of place.
    My Beautiful Disciples, I'm really not the Main Character!
    Fantasy · Revonne
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh24d
    Commented

    ……. How would he be able to even yell stop if she can move faster than he can see

    "Stop!" Eren called out when the dagger was merely a few inches away from her throat.
    My Beautiful Disciples, I'm really not the Main Character!
    Fantasy · Revonne
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh1mth
    Commented

    And so the epic scene from the movie turns into a grown man behaving like a child who wants attention LOL

    "It's not the kid…it's me. I am Iron Man," Tony declared on the screen before walking away.
    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Mehmehmeh
    Mehmehmeh1mth
    Commented

    …..nope these last 2 chapters ruined the whole book for me, good luck on your book author but this is it for me

    Ch 13 A Contracted Killer [2]
    Extra's Descent
    Fantasy · athex
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