Master4thWall
I have read fiction novels and fanfics for a while now. Yet, after some time I have noticed that for some strange reason a small minority of people believe that there is a difference between an anime world and a swords and magic world. Mostly one is seen as fake and not real(the anime world) while the is considered to actually be real(swords and magic world). Their was even a fanfic where the mc talks to r.o.b and rob says that those worlds(anime and the like) aren't real. With that being said rob then gave the mc two choices. option 1)be put in a dream where that anime world is created for you, but at the cost of you never being able to reincarnate. option 2) be reincarnated in world that actually exist, it can be either a regular one or a swords and magic one. Looking at that fanfic I was perplexed because from a genre stand point both anime and swords and magic both fall under the fantasy category. So, why say that this one is real but the other isnt. Funnily enough the author even tried defending this, but was instantly called out due to his/her own views being hypocritical. random thoughts
I absolutely hate those setups where someone is reincarnated, with a god involved and says it's a reward but they'll be stripped of their memories. Everything that makes them, "them" gone. So it's really a reward for whoever comes after. Much like a normal reincarnation where the memories are either scrubbed clean or merge deep and buried in the soul so fresh new experiences can be made.
I skipped a large section of this chapter because it was pointless drivel in the dude's head. Next time show don't tell, you basically vomited words at me that have no actual bearing on the story. His introspective thoughts should not have been used in your hook chapter, you made your MC look like a spastic who spends his whole life over thinking things inside his own head and ignoring what is happening literally in his face. Not an interesting dude to read about let alone see from the perspective of.
You have rolled in such a way just to say that it would have the player system, I don't know, you could have skipped so much and have gone straight to the point, literally, I skipped the whole chapter until the end because you kept putting data that will be completely irrelevant later when I leave that space