Oh, it's good, but as I wrote before, we still don't know much, only 6 chapters have passed, so the world development score couldn't be set and that has lowered the grade, another thing we don't have much of is the design About the character, for example, we only know that he is someone who is afraid of clowns and fixes everything with a punch, we don't know anything else about him, that's why the review is also lowered. The quality of the story and updates are excellent as in all your stories, but those things I mentioned before detracted from its score.

From the little we have been able to see from the chapters (6) we can say that he is quite good, a unique guy like MC who fixes everything with a punch, has no meta-knowledge and goes about his days, all that can be said It is that at the moment it is on a good path. Now, this author makes good stories, but he has the problem that he mysteriously disappears without any explanation and leaves stories that are also just as good unfinished. Let's hope the same thing doesn't happen with this one, but we'll see.

she can be my mommy then

wrong, is Morgan Le Fay

honestly... at this point the only i want is Misha turn a dark lady and kill Harry, Dumbledore and Ron

honestly, I still don't understand why Misha doesn't ignore Harry like he's doing with her, Misha has a lot more friends, she doesn't need to go after her twin, honestly, since they started Hogwarts, Harry has only gotten close to his twin through the mirror, and that happens at CHRISTMAS, he has passed her olympically since they stepped on the grounds for the first time

So... are you sending Lorelei with a stupid like Shirou?? yes... this was interesting until I read this part

what a plot twist, his mother was the enemy since the start!!

Has everyone including Harry forgotten that there is a female Potter at Hogwarts? Except for the Slytherins apparently

thanks for wasting my time with this, i wish i never found this fanfic

ty!, didnt know about him, only know lycan cause pjo xD and they only say he was the first lycan

lycan?? tantalus offer his son Pelope to the gods at a banquet where only demeter ate, idk about lycan legend xD

Tantalus, son of zeus, he cooked his own son in a pot and offered it as food at a banquet without telling anyone where the meat was from

speedforce

take out for example we can remove the word I said and put just smiled, we know what the mc is talking about, it is not necessary to emphasize it

It is not necessary to put "I said" in this sentence, with putting at the beginning "I was unsure, now...", more than anything so as not to repeat the word I said every 2 sentences. (I'm going to put this in the sentences where I think you could put other words that mean the same thing without having to put all the time I said, if it bothers you or anything, tell me and I'll stop doing it or delete the comments).

try not to always use after each sentence of the characters X said or X said, if you are going to put it in each sentence it can become a bit annoying to read, simply because of the context of the sentence you already know who is speaking, so you can say, murmur, shout, whisper, that kind of thing to know the emphasis that he put on the sentence and of course when he speaks normally you can put said, but if you put it in each sentence as I said before it can become very repetitive and annoying

I have to say that at first I didn't like the story, I don't know why but whenever I read that the MC did something in my mind I thought "cliche, idiot or some other things", but in the last chapters I'm starting to like it a lot more, I don't know if it's me, your writing or what, but I hope you keep it up, because it's one of the few really interesting lol stories around here

I still don't understand why you put rhetorical questions in the middle of the story, honestly the only thing they do is take you out of the immersion of the story more than help

6 years....