Melshan
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Melshan36minCommentedMaximus was filled with anger at this moment, fortunately he could control his anger, if not he would have taken his dragons and the Great eagles and burned the entire Slavers Bay to the Ground every city would have been burned.- Melshan1hCommented
I know that Dorne has its own cultures and such, but in Westeros the purity of women is given a lot of importance, especially noble ones, not to mention a princess like Arianne, Doran was very hesitant in this, he should have kept his daughter's purity intact.
He started to regret not caring the first time his daughter told him that she had lost her virginity, but at the time he didn't care about it, but now he wishes he did something since getting revenge for Ellia has gotten farther away. - Melshan2hCommented
I had forgotten to comment on this Riya, it gave the impression that she just wants to humiliate, make fun of the MC, that she sees the MC as a clown and doesn't take the MC's confession seriously, she would have accepted to go on a date with anyone who had asked her out, as if she had nothing interesting or better to do and accepted to go out with the MC and not her confession....... This confession of the MC's feelings towards Riya, for her is nothing more than entertainment and nothing serious, much less having feelings for the MC, at least that's how I felt about Riya.
Ch 2 Echoes of Destiny - Melshan16hReplied to Jeet_1993
I understand that you, the author, don't want to make the MC an ultra alpha from the beginning and all, but I found it a bit exaggerated that the MC was talking to the woman, stuttering all the time and looking down, full of shame/fear/nervous... This behavior doesn't correspond to what was said about the MC, being someone who practices martial arts, teaches, seeks a lot of knowledge/reading/improvement, having this behavior of a beta/passive/fearful/nervous/embarrassed I found it quite strange.
Ch 2 Echoes of Destiny - Melshan17hCommentedCh 7 Night before battle
- Melshan17hCommentedCh 6 Perilous Choices
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The MC has to think about his own personal gain....... Hehehehe
Aditya nodded, thinking hard about what to do. He knew he had a crucial decision to make, whether to align himself with the Mughal forces and potentially alter the course of history on his favour, or to stay loyal to King Hemu and try to change the tragic fate that awaited them at Panipat. - Melshan18hCommentedCh 5 Death? or the new Beginning? ~Re-edited
- Melshan18hCommentedEven though he wanted to tell his new friend everything, as in his memories where this person was the most trusted, he knew it was too dangerous to admit it, risking his credibility.
- Melshan18hCommented
I hope MC has some golden fingers.
He entertained the idea that one of his memories was real and the other was being imposed as an inheritance. He wondered if he had been gifted some system of transmigration, so he tried his luck. - Melshan18hCommented"Don't cry... Get a good husband an...kids ," he chocked.
- Melshan18hCommentedCh 4 Showdown Begins
- Melshan18hCommented
Why didn't she go back/run from where she came from? Did she just stand there and let the bandits surround her?
Riya felt intense fear and desperation as thoughts of impending violence consumed her mind. Despite her instincts urging her to run, Riya knew she couldn't escape as she was completely surrounded. - Melshan18hCommentedCh 2 Echoes of Destiny
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- Melshan19hCommentedCh 1 Little Introduction before we start ?
- Melshan19hCommented
No Yuri, Yuri is NTR.
Well, I might be influenced by cultivation novels but there is no compromise with my basics. There wont be NTR or incest. Except that I intend to go all out. I assure you that if you belong from the men of culture sect , you wont be disappointed. - Melshan19hCommented
Harem is life.......S2
"Then why harem? will r18 be good?"