isekai is transmigration

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thats good

Dang man, you have my condolences. Take the time you need man, don't worry about this.

she deserves it hmph...

yeah .... no(tone it down in this area). it sounds weird trying to imagine master roshi saying this. Although hes a pervert its more in twrms of a mix fro. sanji and brook in pervertedness, not this.

Dang that was quick lol 😂, thanks for the speedy response.

honestly if bulmas reaction was toned down by a degree then overall it would be better because they havent even faught people after the dragon balls whom are after immortality yet. Plus knowing that the mc had grown up dealing with a terminal illness could be used for her to understand why he worded his wish like that, but instead she blatenly makes an assumption that the mc wished for immortality in her head then tries to call him out on it when he clearly didnt say immortality anywhere during the process. Also the shenron getting mad due to the two wishes doesnt make sense. Here's why i say that. the mc stated to modify his body so that it does two things. his whole wish is his body being able to do two thing under a set of conditions which isnt equivalent to wishing to be able to do two things. its not really a play on words at all. if you say i wish to be able to adapt and over come my limits then your wishing for an ablility. He isnt really doing that here.

I. get he wanted to stretch with this sparing session but is he not struggling a little to much. Yeah Im aware he isnt serious but even when playing around he out class them by a very large margin. If anything he should be toying with while practing the sun breathing to increase his template rate intergration. plus he doesnt need to use a real sword at all. just a wooden one or a vranch would (chakra can make it alot more durable)

Shouldn't mc be able to out grow broly or vastly stronger than him despite his transformation as Cumber was capable of the same feat plus more in the heros timeline. Or is this to say mc hasnt fully tapped into the power which wouldn't make sense as base cumber was dogwalking heros goku and vegeta.

it was good for a while before the author started focing the mc to go through the same thing again and again

i would try and change the labeling, the word mutant is and can be associated with something terrible. So why not change it to meta humans a s it is one step towards the path of co existence with humans

The dark world was the last actually decent if not good stand alone Thor movie. Everything following has been trash.

lol 😂

remember he was around that age when he transmigrated there.

So the author seems to have made a mistake here. when they talk about his achievements they werent gained in 10 days, but instead over serveral months. Remember he was the cream of the crop at his base and ended up becoming a legend with rumors spreading about a rookie recuite. Note that steve also left eight months ago one for when he was traing and preparing for the experiment and the others for post experiment retraing. Also mc left the base after 1 more month training so... the actually length of time it took has been a couple of months. The author just sucks at keeping track the times he stated which make it sound like omplete bs.

Although I don't write, personally I think this whole build up could have been done better. The Mc seems lacking in actually character development for example personality wise he seems stuck up, with no feelings towards others and mean he tries to come up with an excuse for his lack of empathy toelwards curses. He doesn't really communicate nor go out out of his way to actually get to know his class mates. The pacing is also going way to fast, he lacked proper motivation from day one. He hasn't really contemplated his end goal. Outside of all this and some other things the story is fine, just take your time to develop the story. Don't worry about keeping it honed towards a certain direction and consider the possible butterfly affects his action will have on others and the world.

yeah thats also what was stated during their meeting

Overall it is a great story with little to no grammatical mistakes. However, the pov of Cane is boring. He's too perfect with no actual flaws which hampers the story in the long run. It would have been much more interesting actual watching him climb the latter towards being an overlord while building his empire. Theirs also the relationship development area...it's kinda lacking especially when hes first introduced into the story. The jabs he thrown at lucifer were unnecessary and overplayed. In general he is a gary sue type character.... Though this is just my opinion after reading it.

I think hes getting them its just to many to actually keep count of while also continuing the story right now. If I had to give a guess of how many probably enough to improve all his skills by a level or two with like 20 mistakes each.