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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Although I don't write, personally I think this whole build up could have been done better. The Mc seems lacking in actually character development for example personality wise he seems stuck up, with no feelings towards others and mean he tries to come up with an excuse for his lack of empathy toelwards curses. He doesn't really communicate nor go out out of his way to actually get to know his class mates. The pacing is also going way to fast, he lacked proper motivation from day one. He hasn't really contemplated his end goal. Outside of all this and some other things the story is fine, just take your time to develop the story. Don't worry about keeping it honed towards a certain direction and consider the possible butterfly affects his action will have on others and the world.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Becoming the strongest as Yuji Itadori
    Anime & Comics · TheJiujitsuGuy
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    yeah thats also what was stated during their meeting

    Ch 6 Chapter 24 - Corporeal Realm
    In the World of Yuan Zun as Zhou Yuan (A Dragon Prince Yuan Fanfic)
    Fantasy · Mohit_0812
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Overall it is a great story with little to no grammatical mistakes. However, the pov of Cane is boring. He's too perfect with no actual flaws which hampers the story in the long run. It would have been much more interesting actual watching him climb the latter towards being an overlord while building his empire. Theirs also the relationship development area...it's kinda lacking especially when hes first introduced into the story. The jabs he thrown at lucifer were unnecessary and overplayed. In general he is a gary sue type character.... Though this is just my opinion after reading it.

    Hazbin Hotel: Cain and Adam
    TV · OneMoreScore
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Replied to beigehawk

    I think hes getting them its just to many to actually keep count of while also continuing the story right now. If I had to give a guess of how many probably enough to improve all his skills by a level or two with like 20 mistakes each.

    Ch 2423 The Holy Emperor Closes the Door (4)
    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    I would honestly say an evil super sayian transformation brings out the inate desire for destruction and power nothing else.

    Ch 68 New Perspective
    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Commented

    This is hilarious 😂

    Ch 2370 The Jade Scroll Provokes Murderous Intent (2)
    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    congratulations 🎊

    Good news is, I graduated, so I will have more time to do this, so that's cool.
    The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
    Movies · Beans_on_a_tree
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Replied to Noire_Lilium
    At least there was some good eye candy to be had with them. Robin was too young for her tastes but that green shapeshifter boy was kind of cute in a goofy way. And the cyborg guy was just one big hubba hubba hunk of man and metal~!
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • maelvoid_2025
    maelvoid_20252mth
    Replied to Man_of_culture_69
    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Ryan
    Marvel - The primogenitor of the symbiotes
    Movies · Rowen_Kun
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Yeah...No agree to disagree.

    'Fun' like its many colorful villains and heroes. Some of them could even put up a good fight. His siblings, obviously. Even if they could be trying and tiresome. But Damian had been surprised when he found that Harley Quinn in particular showed herself as a worthy opponent for him to test himself against. It almost made being restricted by Father's rules worth it. Almost.
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    It was a good chapter...Just not for me, the whole dialog part made it hard to keep focus..

    Ch 41 INTERLUDE 5: The Witcher Returns to Night City
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Technically they arent fictional, there all real. It's just that the people who get a glimpse of said reality while in their own reality perceive it to be a dream of their own creation.

    In the same line of thought, there were Sean's claims of what and where each of those lives were. At least there, Clark understood parallel worlds and knew them to be real. But knowing they were real wasn't the same thing as learning that many of them were fictional and that there were entire other multiverses outside of their own.
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    I really wanna see the baby momma tiamat

    Ch 31 30: LIVE at the Dead End!
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Replied to Yukio_Sama

    Your right because the orginal author said that females in that race don't exist and King cold had him al alone. This means that they are both male and female.

    "I can remember my mother and father sending me off to this planet, not to conquer it, but to be safe from the man that conquered even the saiyan race, and I can remember the older brother who excitedly chattered to me about how his power had grown to over give hundred and how he would make sure to train me up to be strong just like him so we could go on all the exciting missions together." I let that hang in the air for a moment, "My parents are dead. My brother killed by near enough my own hands because of the original, and on top of that, the original, pitifully weak minded as he is, stomped our grandfather to death because he forgot who he was and couldn't control himself as an Oozaru."
    To Go Even Further Beyond (Dragon Ball Z)
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    B.S it was the other way around Zaraki was the one who unconsciously lowered their strength as he was in awe of the first kenpachi's strength. He never wanted the battle to end, but Captain unahonna couldn't keep up, though she won in the end she understood that infact she was not Zaraki's opponent. The conclusion of the battled allowed her to realize what had happened. This caused her to feel as though she had committed an forgivable sin, which is the self imposed restrictions of Zaraki.

    In order to continue fighting with that child, Retsu Unohana followed Tenjirou Kirinji and learned the healing techniques of Kaido. For so many years, she had always wanted to find someone to test whether she now had the strength to make that child fight at full power.
    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
    Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Why isnt the mc taking advantage of his prior knowledge, train till hes on the brink of death and bam power up- do it again and again again....

    Ch 7 Rationality.
    Saiyan in Warhammer
    Anime & Comics · SrDevoxero
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Words of endearment like dear or honey would be better to further show their connection/bond...Plus it's very unusual for a married couple to call each other by their names constantly... Also its not cultivation its training because cultivation entells the practice of inner strength. Which spiritual energy isnt... Evil spirits can be a little confusing so calling them hollows is better especially since they both have lived in the soul society for countless years,which will reinforce the labeling of hollows. The only ones who call them evil spirits are humans.

    Ch 90 Thoughts  
    Fate in Bleach: Unlimited Blade Works!
    Anime & Comics · ZenpaiTrans
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Replied to Crom_Darkstar

    I read this as him having 3 gas lighting techniques lol

    He also wears the Mishima style red gauntlets with a triangular pattern of metallic studs on the back of the hands.
    Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer
    Movies · SlimeSage
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    Replied to Lightgiver

    Sure is.

    I am under 18 and am just starting my first year at University, so please be understanding if updates are slow.
    The Ashen Keeper (Marvel x Dark Souls x Bloodborne)
    Video Games · Lightgiver
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  • maelvoid_2025
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    The mc randomly knows a lot of stuff that he hasn't been shown at all. Its best to act like the reader knows absolutely nothing when writing stories like this, otherwise it just becomes a question of when and how does he even know that.

    Ch 3 Back On Earth
    Baki Into Bleach
    Anime & Comics · DrWright
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