Comments of chapter undefined of Invictus: A Naruto Insert.

Forced emotional drama. Kinda boring. It was hard to write because you know it was badly done.

Good story so far but Not a fan of this chap mc could have made up something about sensing danzo meeting itachi and prevented this and let the original plan happen. Hate when reincarnated mc just follow the script in fear of butterfly effect he pretty much knowingly let children and babies be massacred by a warm hearted person.

This is the dumbest thing ever smh a good story ruined. And we didnt even hear about Itachi getting his health checked out.

all this useless drama is stupid

please rewrite this chap 👦

stupid and useless drama... You are forcing to much drama

Worst chapter so far. Useles drama and selfpity from mc. Literaly could have been said in few words. Uchiha masacre happened and Naruto was sad because of it. Here, done

I liked this chapter. Naruto not doing anything, to keep canon intact so that he can protect his sister is a good character building moment, where he realizes how dumb he was.

Horrible done. He could have saved the uchiha clan but choose not to. Even if he did not meet danzo, he could made up a lie saying that while traveling the village, he saw a person with danzo characteristics and that he had over a dozen uchiha eyes on his eye and arm. That he felt different and blabla bla... Corner danzo with the uchiha and sarutobi and remove him from the village.... I have never saw a fanfic where the mc does not at leasts tries to remove danzo from the picture... Dropping it.

Man, every time I read this I'm in a pretty good mood, but after reading this fic my mood would turn down.

it's too forced. well i don't expect much from a fanfic anyway. I'll continue to see where it goes.

helps itachi with his health but allows him to do the one thing he regrets since it keeps him from his brother

seriously!!!! he could've easily said some lines for itachi to think about, like riddles etc why even have the mc be reincarnator if he's going to follow the plot?????

Seems forced

boring..tq for the chap..dropp~

thanks for the chapter but I gotta drop it here. I'm not looking for a retelling of naruto with a sister cause that's all this is so far. So much potential for something new and unique ruined on multiple levels 1 removing a reincarnation memories. That is simply a horrible cliche. Soap opera level of cliche drama. Nearly caused me to drop it outright. 2 sticking to the plot. I don't mind it nessecarily but the m.c is too much of a drama queen. He doesn't act like a person who has grown at all. Makes the entire mature person living another life theme mute when the m.c makes childish mistakes like this. It should have been addressed far earlier in the story that he had no intention of changing the plot to prepare the reader and explain the reasoning. And then massacre happens and we geta solemn m.c who has already made his peace with his decision long ago. Or we get a naruto a scheme to leave clue to change the future. None of this was shown! The author purposely ignored all the m.c future thoughts on the matter cause obviously changing the naruto plot at this point would be too difficult for him to write because it would change too much of his source material. Imagine writing multiple characters and their interactions and how it would change future plot. I imagine the author just figured that it was too much of a hassled and killed them off out of laziness. He couldn't write an Itachi clan head... the authors simply too lazy.

the entire Uchiha clan was wasted. how weak your imagination is. in your fik, all adults are just complete idiots. this only makes it sadder to read this cal. instead of stretching your psychological monologue, you would write something really interesting, and at least a little logical.

Geez need a lot of edit. Lots of words are connected instead of having space in between .

With how extremely difficult it is to write a book, I find myself reading this. But I see the few comments from pensonas who would not even know what to write to give life to the novel giving their opinion with idiotic disgust. Naruto could not tell Shisui, that it would be the old village councilor who wanted to steal his eyes and kill him, that like Itachi ... the Uchihas are naive, not to mention that Danzo knew instantly and would have done many things worse, not counting Obito's involvement in weakening the villages, killing his own clan