anggi
iam Indonesia reader..i hope the prize of crystal stone can be lower..1$ can only read one chapter??to stinky
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yeah i know..this is just an input for u ok..no offence..i respect ur story,,truly..but u see..this is about Naruto..not some kingdom building..while u want to make it dark..it no longer funny..u make Hinata full deceit and manipulation that no longer look like she love Naruto..she just want to use him..not mention the other.. u make her quiet OP..and yet she hide behind others..now the story bcome just about a psycopath Hinata..bordering megalomania..thats why i said no longer fun.. remember the basic..this is Naruto..