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Hosphar
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Hosphar
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Entrail_JI
Entrail_JIAuthorEntrail_JI

Small message, there might be no cjap tomorrow. (I have exam on 2 of february) Hower dont worry. This month im going back to two a day (starting 2-3 of feb)

Arkard
ArkardLv15Arkard

I think you left out the part where Everblood got hard

Dantalion72
Dantalion72Lv15Dantalion72

I hope there will also be a nola reaction chapter after that :(

Commusyou
CommusyouLv12Commusyou

I-I'm not crying, you know!

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Tprop_M
Tprop_MLv14Tprop_M

I may sound full of my self and you may ignore me just stating my opinion I think you can improve the way characters interaction with each other, their dialogue doesn't really sound...hmm..you can say how usually people talk? I really like it overall just whenever there is dialogue between characters it feels odd.

System_Creator
System_CreatorLv13System_Creator

Thanks for the volume! Imma keep saying volume instead of chapter while the message is still at the end of the chapter. Quite emotional this one, but at the same time, I think it'll hit even harder when I see Nola's reaction, if Ren decides to tell her at all. I hope your exam goes well!

khtycc20
khtycc20Lv11khtycc20

i really enjoying this,please take you time author ! ;)...

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129Lv14Lucas_Sousa_7129

Why is everything involving Everblood forced? Seriously, the MC got rid of all the bodies he killed without using a bomb, but conveniently leaves the only one who would hand over his identity. Everything that involves this guy is forced, the first time was forced and this one was too. Good thing it's just this character and the rest of the work is well crafted.

Visionary_0
Visionary_0Lv3Visionary_0

Good, I felt that he would just leave is family alone to not "Cause Trouble" and i don't like that one bit

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Aizsa
AizsaLv15Aizsa

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

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Ashton_Clark
Ashton_ClarkLv15Ashton_Clark

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5_oinkchan

nice ending

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Sector_98
Sector_98Lv13Sector_98

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

TheLedgend27
TheLedgend27Lv15TheLedgend27

thanks for the chapter and good luck on the exam author

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Quang_Ga
Quang_GaLv13Quang_Ga

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

CowboyRat
CowboyRatLv2CowboyRat

thx for the chapter! cried a little bit at the end.

Rookie_Draconian
Rookie_DraconianLv3Rookie_Draconian

DEFINITELY NOT CRITICISM!!! Author-san don't know why but i expected myself to cry when ren meets his parents but it didn't happened and also I wanted him to meet nola (more than Amanda) I think the dialogue is a bit lacking in emotional factor. AGAIN! DEFINITELY NOT CRITICISM!!!

Mc_Fly
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Matheus_Zanlorenzi
Matheus_ZanlorenziLv13Matheus_Zanlorenzi

YOSSSS

Comalet
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thanks for the chapter