Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

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Thanks for the chapter. Mc waited till the best moment to “steal” the kill

Yikes! That was a tense chapter! Now I’m curious on how Ren’s relationship with the main characters of his novel will be since he was caught pulling an Itachi and (in their point of view) Mostly ignoring their fight and nearly allowing then to die. I’m looking forward to the next chapter! Good job author!

Another long chapter... Was originally 5000 something words, but I decided to split it into two chapters. Starting from next week 10GT = 1 extra chap 20GT = 2 extra chap 30GT = 3 extra chap 40GT = 4 extra chap 50GT = 5 extra chap 60GT = 6 extra chap or 400PS = 1 extra chap 600PS = 2 extra chap 800PS = 3 extra chap 1000PS = 4 extra chap 1200PS = 5 extra chap 1400PS = 6 extra chap I'm not sure how this works. Do I do extra chapters the week after or as soon as power stones goal is hit? Anyhow, that's how it is.

Was expecting for Ren to flex his power infront of them XD Then their mouths open like a fish. But this one is nice. Its like Ren is shrouded in mystery. The three would never know his true power. AND! Ren can even blame it in Kevin killing him because they both use a sword. since no one believes a "trash" can kill the boss

The indifferent Ren knows manners👏👏👏

autor-san your writing is improving with each chapter. please keep it up

can we have a mass release?

hey author why don't you give Ren some awesome skills , if you don't hate it I like to give you some suggestions like 1 eyes of possibilities - it will help him to watch different possibilities , this skill will not help him to see future or not it will help him to see perfect possibilities it will only hellp him to succeed task with easiest way and the rate of sucees will be much higher. 2 time zero- it will Stop the time for user for 10 second it will only work if the opponent is closed to user in 5m range , if strength of the opponent is much higher than the user the time Will be lower than the original time and also it will take lot of burden to the body of user 3 skill I don't have name for this but it will help him to think about 2 things at same time like a one extra brain and one more thing that if you choose 1skill then you have to also pick this skill because if user try to use 1 skill without using 3 skill then the user brain will get explode because he will be seening 100 of possibilities or sometime 1000 and he have to pick one possibilities from them so the burden in brain will 1000× more last thing they are combos of skills

as always, it amaze me how great the story is writed, but, i don't like that the protagonist didn't show off his Eminence to them because the "slept" lolol but i hope he push into the story More! and thanks for the chapter!!

Thanks for the chapter

wats the difference between the first and second move of keiki style, is the first a vertical slice and the second a horizontal slice?

Thanks for the chapter author sama

Thanks for the chap

Ty

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Thank for the chapter! : )

nice chapter!

nice chapter 😁

Oh, one hit one kill!!